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***STAY HIGH***NEW

Postby King Bullet » Sep 3rd, '09, 05:33

Aiyo,here's some new fiya,Stay High.A little weed anthem.Check it out on myspace: www.myspace.com/rapdogg13
Hope you like it...
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Re: ***STAY HIGH***NEW

Postby gutawafang » Sep 3rd, '09, 05:42

Good mixing. Tempo should be faster. :flower:

Voice quite monotonous. But lyrics good. :y:
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Re: ***STAY HIGH***NEW

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 3rd, '09, 10:44

nice mixing , i liked the beat ,, the drums these staff are nice ,, chorus is pretty good too ,, ,, lyrics is good ,, i think if you go a little bit faster it will be dope flow was good , delivery could be better :) ,, your voice is gangsta lol .. but i enjoyed it man,, keep them comming ,,,

i checked this too ,, miss me when i'm gone , : man the chorus is sick ,, really love it ,, lyrics are pretty nice , and your flow is good ,, here you're going a little bit faster, but your voice is louder than the beat ,, so if you can fix that it would be sick ,, for real ,, liked the gun shots too ,, ,,, so yeah ,, good track bro ,,

good job ,, :b: :b:
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Re: ***STAY HIGH***NEW

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 3rd, '09, 11:07

flow is shaky man...hook is actually kool...clearer mixing could help
im not a fan of the mixing....
hook sounds south-ish and that on a west beat lol...
but worked well :y:
2nd verse starts out nice ..... :y:
and yeah the delivery needs to be improved :y:
but on the good side i like how you can make the beat urs namean?... :y: :y:
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Re: ***STAY HIGH***NEW

Postby King Bullet » Sep 3rd, '09, 15:56

by gutawafang on Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:42 am

Good mixing. Tempo should be faster.

Voice quite monotonous. But lyrics good. - thnx.still working on my voice and,yeah,now i see that ''flow'' thing.


by Slim Zaddy on Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:44 am

nice mixing , i liked the beat ,, the drums these staff are nice ,, chorus is pretty good too ,, ,, lyrics is good ,, i think if you go a little bit faster it will be dope flow was good , delivery could be better ,, your voice is gangsta lol .. but i enjoyed it man,, keep them comming ,,,

i checked this too ,, miss me when i'm gone , : man the chorus is sick ,, really love it ,, lyrics are pretty nice , and your flow is good ,, here you're going a little bit faster, but your voice is louder than the beat ,, so if you can fix that it would be sick ,, for real ,, liked the gun shots too ,, ,,, so yeah ,, good track bro ,,

good job ,, - Thnx man. :worship: :D Though I'm not on the chorus,it's DJ Corbett.I'll try to work on
my flow.
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by °[~CHR!$~]° on Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:07 pm

flow is shaky man...hook is actually kool...clearer mixing could help
im not a fan of the mixing....
hook sounds south-ish and that on a west beat lol...
but worked well
2nd verse starts out nice .....
and yeah the delivery needs to be improved
but on the good side i like how you can make the beat urs namean?... - thnx. :D Same thing with
flow I already said.I kinda
don't understand that part with makin' the beat mine...If you could please explain a little bit more? :unsure:
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