verse to a new song i'm writing

[SajN]

YOU BIT THE FIRST LINE FROM EMINEM!!!!!


BITER!!

[SajN]

Oh well..

I like the last lines, but the rest were meeh.. It was pretty simple and nothing special.

[SajN]

I did, but they weren't really anything special, as I said.

[mcZu]

Try to rephrase the first half, the other half is great. Good substance, flow seemed good and the rhymes were good.

[Solace]

Oh well..

I like the last lines, but the rest were meeh.. It was pretty simple and nothing special.

I aint seen you do shit better

[Slim Zaddy]

honestly i have seen better from you as a emotional song , you're always sick in writing emotional pieces , ,, but that's doesn’t mean this is whack nah it's good , i liked the ending ,, but you can do better i know ,, .......... anyway enjoyed this piece ,, keep them coming

[SajN]

Oh well..

I like the last lines, but the rest were meeh.. It was pretty simple and nothing special.

I aint seen you do shit better

YEAAHH!!

I have writer's block


And I can do love or other emotional songs soooo much better than this piece of shit

[Solace]

You can't write because you have writers block?

No, you just can't write.

[Slim Zaddy]

You can't write because you have writers block?

No, you just can't write.

SaJn if i were you ,, i will just write something to show him that you can write ,,

[Solace]

Imagine a place that is disgraced by shit/
Junk and smell, chasing kids/
You think you just imagine it/
Why even bother changing it/
But hey, you’ll probably get amazed by this/
Open your eyes, there it is/
The place with shit that you just pictured/
Oslo.. so ugly, who’s gon fix up/
I can’t clean this shit all by myself/
So here I am, waiting for you guys to help/

Yeah uh SajN you are amazingly dope. "You just pictured....who's gon fix up" i just love that multi.

[SajN]

Well, I wrote that when i had writers block, plus it was for a contest, so I didnt choose the topic myself...



Btw, I never said it was bad, it just wasnt good.. Scotts piece

[SajN]

Here I am stating my opinion about the verse, and y'all hating?

Fuck that, remind me not feed your songs anymore Scott..

[Solace]

You ain't seriously mad, are you?

[SajN]

You ain't seriously mad, are you?

No, I am just mad.

[Slim Zaddy]

Here I am stating my opinion about the verse, and y'all hating?

Fuck that, remind me not feed your songs anymore Scott..

i think also solace::: SaJN , because he started it ,, but keep in mind, i'm not in it , so you can feed my songs bro