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SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

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SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 06:26

[Sac]
And WHEN the small girls walk the stage in LONG BOOTS
Man they taller than the tall girls so they is tall TOO
The 6 foot tall gal goes by the name of Pleasure
walks on the stage but she much shorter then Heather
It's so obvious now that I don't even have to measure
Heather's only 5 foot 5 but wears 8 inch spikes
I guess they're all tall now, it's ALL the girls I LIKE
I want a small girl now i like small girls and tall girls now!!
The Small girl knocks me out like a big BROWN COW
with her lethal weapons that scream POW POW POW!
just got the best booby bash NOW, all i can say is WOW!!
her nipples is my chow, feel like a cat I say MEOWW
I want the tall girl to be very very small now,
can I take your heels off, Is it something youll allow?
Yea knock me out with those size 36 D
Beat me, tease me, CRY SAC JB
I get knocked on the FLO, the small girl climb the poll
The small girls taller than the tall girls Oh no
Im losing control, I got no Dough for this SHOW
Now the small girls in HEELS, the tall girls still SEXY APPEAL
The small girls are tall, the tall girls are SMALL
Whats going ON Mr DJ?
Im losing my mind so PK....!!!!!!

TA TA TA TA TALL GIRLS!!!
SMA SMA SMA SMA SMALL GIRLS!!!
WHATS BETTER THAN A TALL GIRL? HOWS ABOUT A SMALL GIRL!!!
we up in the club & you know how we ball girl
(repeat)

[PK]
i wanna small girl that will come up to my waist
my cock & her mouth is so perfectly placed
small girls MMMMMM their twat has that taste
that sweet sexy taste just taste so great
i like em small i don't mind if there tall
push em up against the wall watch their pants fall
walking in the club see a dwarf down the hall!
Me & Sac hit the club we about to have a ball
its tall girls & small girls that make me jerk off
I would do anything just to get their skirts off
me so hornyyyy me so lonleyyyyy
sac rub my back if you's a true homie
wait scratch that i just want some baloney
I wanna small girl or a tall girl to blow me
baby girl can show me how to groove
i'm in that mood i wanna see ya move (SAYYY)

TA TA TA TA TALL GIRLS!!!
SMA SMA SMA SMA SMALL GIRLS!!!
WHATS BETTER THAN A TALL GIRL? HOWS ABOUT A SMALL GIRL!!!
we up in the club & you know how we ball girl
(repeat)


hope you guys like I'v been writing verses all day :smoking:
another ones coming tommrow called "Michael Myers"
i'm going to see H2 in theaters so i'm pumped :8)
but i'mma get off here & get some ZzZzZ's
mad props to sac for hopping on a creative writing collabo with me :smoking:
peeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Re: SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

Postby gutawafang » Sep 7th, '09, 12:40

How come the font so small? Hard to read. :(

The flow is good but the multis ain't so good. It just rhymes man. The lyrics are on point though, which is a good thing. :y:
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Re: SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 14:28

gutawafang wrote:How come the font so small? Hard to read. :(

The flow is good but the multis ain't so good. It just rhymes man. The lyrics are on point though, which is a good thing. :y:


thanx for the feed :worship:
I know it's just rhymes but I just got into using multis & now I love it :sweating:
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Re: SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 7th, '09, 16:28

don't nobody be sleeping on my boy SacJB :devil:
he's gonna become a hardcore rockstar & tall strippers are gonna suffocate him with their tits :-p
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Re: SacJB & PK - Tall Girls & Small Girls

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:00

Out of 10.

Sac
Flow-8
Structure-4
Multis-2
Rhymes-7
Complexity-1
Wordplay-6

PK
Flow-8
Structure-9
Multis-7
Rhymes-8
Complexity-2
Wordplay-7

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