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Postby enjinn » Sep 17th, '09, 22:22

i couldnt record with my normal mic...so i had to use an old one...feedback is much appreciated and will be returned... http://www.zshare.net/audio/65718708d4f4223b/
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Re: walking on glass

Postby enjinn » Sep 19th, '09, 14:47

uppin...can i get some feedback?...hahaah
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Re: walking on glass

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 23rd, '09, 03:43

quality isnt great lol, not bad though :happy: 8/10
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Re: walking on glass

Postby enjinn » Sep 29th, '09, 14:19

thanks for the comment!
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Re: walking on glass

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 30th, '09, 03:23

AMAZING BEAT!!!... who produced this??

damn, your old mic is not good hahaha, where r u from m8?... kinda cool accent

sounds strong, underground, amazing... whats up with the hook???.. I love the idea, but I'm not sure if that talking works (if that was a hook)

verse 2 is great, a little hard to understand, so if you could post the lyrics would be good

either way, amazing work man... loving it

if you want to remix it, let me know, I'd love to drop a verse to this beat :worship:
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Re: walking on glass

Postby Kez » Oct 1st, '09, 16:42

Beat's good
I like the lyrics, deep shit and the rhymes are good
Flow is well done as well, although i felt the acapella parts were out of place
Your delivery is kinda lacking something though
You don't sound as emotional and that betrays the beat and lyrics
Decent track overall but delivery needs major work
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Re: walking on glass

Postby enjinn » Oct 1st, '09, 22:03

thanks a lot for the comments!...and big ax d...i can send you this beat if you want...and check your pm's :D
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