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Postby DelinQuent » Oct 3rd, '09, 04:07

No autotune.

Just wanted to throw that out there.

I've been gone for awhile, finishing school and working. Then finally had some time and got sick so my voice was fucked. First verse is from before i got sick, second verse was recorded afterward.

This song was recorded, decided i don't wanna put it on my album (Going, Going, Gone). So, I'm releasing it just to keep at least somewhat of a buzz going.

Enjoy, leave feed, thanks.

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EDIT- zshare http://www.zshare.net/audio/6647904996a7e82e/
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby Xray » Oct 3rd, '09, 04:21

Push Ft. D.Dubs - 32 Plays
Going, Going, Gone - 121 Plays
Jumpoff - 19 Plays

Total Plays: 4,183,985
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Anyways this track wasn't bad, the flow felt like you slipped at times. Lyrics weren't bad, and the delivery was nothing special, but then again that beat just sounds boring so that could be why this song turned out like this. Anyways good to have you back and dropping tracks.
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby Emadyville » Oct 3rd, '09, 04:37

Yeah he got mad buzz when he was performing at a local place, he was gettin 60,000 plays a day, and D. Dubs is me btw haha but for real DQ I gave you feed on this, keep doing your thing :y:
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby Xray » Oct 3rd, '09, 04:47

Emadyville wrote:Yeah he got mad buzz when he was performing at a local place, he was gettin 60,000 plays a day, and D. Dubs is me btw haha but for real DQ I gave you feed on this, keep doing your thing :y:

Thanks for clearing that up. 60k a day that's fucking crazy. And I know your D. Dubs haha I was actually listening to that collab of the 2 of you. Not sure if I've heard it before but it was pretty good man.
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 3rd, '09, 04:55

thanks for the feed sajjad. the flow did slip up a few times, thanks for pointing that out. just some syllable errors it seems.

and yeah when i opened for ray j i was getting crazy plays everyday for about 3 months or so, then it dwindled. quite disappointing.
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby Tornado » Oct 3rd, '09, 14:49

Ejoyed it, though it does sound kinda similar to the personal songs you did in your mixtape but i ain't complaining. Thought flow was good but your emotional delievery could've been more for me ya'know but good to see you back. Alos thought the beat was empty but w/ever
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 3rd, '09, 18:08

thanks for the feed tornado.

i actually liked the beat when i heard it on MC Anonymous's tape, i loved how it sounded empty. Gave me the feeling of what it's like to be empty inside, to feel like you're falling.

thanks for taking the time to listen :y:
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 3rd, '09, 19:16

myspace ain't loading the music player for me

can u zshare it? :flower:
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 3rd, '09, 19:35

good to see ya back
verses are good....nice melodic flow....delivery was calme as it needed to be
hook was a minus point to me...didnt like it...was like extremely boring to me...
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Re: Falling-Album Reject

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 3rd, '09, 23:38

Big Ax-D wrote:myspace ain't loading the music player for me

can u zshare it? :flower:


zshare is down. any other good hosts?

Chris, thanks for the feed. i agree, the hook was the last thing i did, normally it's the first. i hadn't even written a single bar for about 1-2 months, i'm a little out of shape, but it'll come back.

again, thanks.
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Postby enjinn » Oct 4th, '09, 15:49

good shit...beat was aight...but i was feeling the lyrics...nice track
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Re: Falling-Album Reject--- zShare up now

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 4th, '09, 16:56

thanks for taking some time out to listen
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Re: Falling-Album Reject--- zShare up now

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 02:59

I loved it. Going going one was dope too. :y:
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Re: Falling-Album Reject--- zShare up now

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 5th, '09, 20:08

hmm, I've hurd this beat not long ago, I think someone made a track to it... but I'm not sure
many beats sound familiar this days

the flow is excelent, you ride to the beat very good... nice thang bro

I don't know why you scrapped this track out, its real real good, I enjoyed a lot

you should've added autotune on the hook to make it sound more melodical

very very enjoyable track man, good work

if you need beats for youre album holla at me :y:
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Re: Falling-Album Reject--- zShare up now

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 6th, '09, 01:11

thanks for the feed ax, i didn't even try putting autotune on it, i honestly wasn't too concerned with the track lol.

guta, thanks for checking both tracks, glad you ejoyed both :y:

again, thanks to everyone who checked.
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