


Who's arm is this?
I must have cut it off of the pharmacist
and refused to renew my seventh prescription of darvocets
I'm the old man who lives upstairs and starves his pets
and never leaves his house 'cause he thinks his car's possessed
I hate my life
that's why I degrade my wife
grabbed a paper plate to make a sandwich
and just ate the knife
my mother's screaming 'please heal him, take him straight to Christ'
meet you on the street and slap you just to break the ice
made a bomb threat with a fake device
strip you naked twice, pistol whip you and force you to take advice
and if you catch me bobbin' my head to some bullshit spittin'
I was probably just tryin to shake the lice
bugs fallin' out of my head
I'm wishin' I was dead
while I'm crawlin out of my bed
found it red
and my rash is returning
I feel the sensation of burning
occurring, usually during pain for release in my urine
screamin' at my shadow 'please quit followin' me'
these pills keep screamin' 'please quit swollin' me'
the devil keeps screamin' 'please get down on one knee'
took the drugs before the cops ever found them on me


One Mic wrote:I think the first vese of Stay Wide Awake is better than the 2nd
I think I smell the scent of a placenta
I enter central park its dark its winter in decemba
I see my target with my car and park it at a poacha tenda
Young girl by the name of Brenda and I pretend to befriend her
I sit down beside her like a spider hi there girl you mighta
Heard of me before see whore your the girl that ida
Assault and rape and figure why not try to make your pussy wida
Fuck you with ad the umbrella and open it up while the shits inside ya
Im the kinda guy thats mild bt I mite blip in get a little bit wilda
Impregnate a lesbian gal and lets see ya have triplets nd milda
Incinegrate them babies as soon as that out ho with formalda
Hide in cyanide girl you can try nd hide you can try to scream louda
No need for no gun powder that only takes the fun outta
Murderin id rather go bimp in nd now you see just how the
Fuck I do just what I do when I cut right thru your scalp uh..
Shit wait a minute I mean skull my knife seems dull
Pull another one out uh




$(@TTY B@Y wrote:Evan C. wrote:There are a number of his songs from the 90s that are debatable for being the best in terms of multi-syllabic rhyming.
why don't you give us some then? that's the whole point of this topic.

Evan C. wrote:$(@TTY B@Y wrote:Evan C. wrote:There are a number of his songs from the 90s that are debatable for being the best in terms of multi-syllabic rhyming.
why don't you give us some then? that's the whole point of this topic.
Or you could just learn what multi-syllabic rhymes are, or learn more of Eminem's catalogue and figure it out for yourself.
But anyway; Rock Bottom, Role Model, Brain Damage, and It's OK are fine examples.




Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren

One Mic wrote:Lose Yourself is sick.
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There’s vomit on his sweater already, mom’s spaghetti
He’s nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
(Copy & Pasted this below)...
Those “Lose Yourself” rhymes are some of Eminem’s absolute best, and that’s saying a lot. What he does here lyrically is all out amazing. He uses lots of multi-rhymes and in-rhymes, not seperately but together to weave a complex lyrical web.
He uses 5-6 multies in just four lines, but he also repeats the “palms” sound in other words. It’s echoed in “drop” and “bombs,” but also in “vomit” and “on his,” which is itself a little multi. The killer for me is the use of “keeps” in the last line, which rhymes with “knees weak” in the first. Study those lines, because they’re as complex rhyme-wise as some analytic calculus.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren

One Mic wrote:LOL. Like he didn't know what multi's where before posting the topic.
1.) It is pretty simple
2.) One simple google search would tell you anyways
I just want people to post up their own personal lines/lyrics and what they think the best are...

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:Evan C. wrote:One Mic wrote:LOL. Like he didn't know what multi's where before posting the topic.
1.) It is pretty simple
2.) One simple google search would tell you anyways
I just want people to post up their own personal lines/lyrics and what they think the best are...
If he knew...why the fuck post the question if he's heard most of Eminem's songs? You can listen and hear it yourself.
LOL are you aware that this is an eminem forum? a place where we DISCUSS things like this.

LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..






$(@TTY B@Y wrote:Amadeo wrote:btw.. when i first heard the second verse of Stay Wide Awake, my jaw hit the floor.
lol, same here.

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