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I'll Meet You When I Get There

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I'll Meet You When I Get There

Postby Inzanity » Jan 7th, '06, 02:27

(Verse 1)
I close my eyes
and think back to simpler times
you were one of the 1st people to hold me when I came into this Hell called earth
I have a picture of u holdin' me in ya arms at the hospital shortly after my mom gave birth
you weren't my aunt but I called u my aunti
now all I have left are memories that haunt me
When I was a little girl and we lived in Chicopee Center on Dewhite Street
every night u'd tuck me in tightly
U would give me a doller for allounce everyday for putting the shoes in the box
I know a doller isn't much but for a 5 year old it's alot
you would take me to the park and push me on the swing u'd catch me when I went down the slide
When I fell down and got hurt u'd kiss my "bobo" and wipe the tears from my eyes
Sometime's I wish I was the one who died

(Course)
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams

(Verse 2)
After we had moved from Chicopee Center to Percy Street in Aldenville
U stoped living with us u moved to South Carolina and while u were down there u had fallen ill
When u got better u moved back to Chicopee and lived with us again
I was so happy to have u back u were my best friend
U didn't live with us long u moved into ur sister's house with ur 2 daughters
My mom begged u not to she knew DSS would take ur kids away so didn't my father
and when it happed all my mom could say was "It's just another lesson life taught her"
U moved back to Carolina and I wish u never did
U had fallen sick again only this time there was no "Don't cry Aunti Mary's gettin' better kid"
u wrote me a couple letters and sent me a Teddy Bear
I still have it I kept it as a reminder that when I need u ur already there
In my memories of the past
some how the memories always bring u back

(Course)
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams

(Verse 3)
Losein' u was like losein' a mother
It's one of the most painful wounds to discover
I'll never forget seeing ur daughter Heidi at ur funerul wit that sad look in her eyes as the tears strolled down her cheek
She could barely talk when she steped up to the podium to speak
And my mom who had grown up wit u felt a true hurt
She could barely get out of her seat let alone get on a podium to say a few words
ur youngest daughter Falicia didn't even know u had died she was livin' wit a foster family down south
She cried when she found out
She knew about u but she didn't remember u it was so sad
She was only a year old when she got taking away she wanted to meet u so bad
I was sixteen years old when u passed away
after the funerul when I was lieing in bed that night I thought back to the past and prayed

(Course)
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams
I guess I'll meet u when I get there
I don't know how long that will be
for now I'll just cry my next tear
and hope I see u in my dreams
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Postby Vettori » Jan 7th, '06, 19:56

The best feeling in the world to me is getting goosebumps,
You should be happy cause you gave someone that feeling
Wow, That's real touching, You take it easy
Keep writing without struggle :'(
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Postby Vettori » Jan 7th, '06, 21:12

Thanx alot bro, :P....Complimant gladly taken.....YEa man That sounds good, I wanna here somethin from you also :P
Hurry up already im gettin impatient.....J/p....Take ur time...Times important

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Oh shit

Postby Vettori » Jan 7th, '06, 21:18

OH SHIT this is the wrong Place...I thought this was still in the audio section :sweating:
I feel like a retard....Ummmm Yea sorry for this guys...anyways yea sounds good....And again EP Nice shit...it was really good

ez
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 7th, '06, 23:04

g_killa wrote:ive sed this since the beginin u r by far 1 of the best here
keep it up and also i might rite sumin 4 this place soon so if u want id love a collab


Yea I wanna collab. Just let me know when
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That Wuz Really Nice

Postby pimpin2ez » Jan 8th, '06, 00:24

I relly liked that u should do more it wuz relly nice
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Postby emmkayy41 » Jan 9th, '06, 00:45

that was really good, emptypromise.
i really felt it
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Postby Ivy » Jan 14th, '06, 17:54

No offence, but I've heard a song like this, the words are switched around and edited in yours, but it's a country song called "If You Get There Before I Do." It flows just like that song and everything.
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 14th, '06, 20:00

taylorakatiggi wrote:No offence, but I've heard a song like this, the words are switched around and edited in yours, but it's a country song called "If You Get There Before I Do." It flows just like that song and everything.


um no because I wrote this myself and it's about my aunt marry so wat the fuck r u talking about?

this song dosen't even have a beat to it oh by the way I know wat song ur talking about it's by collan ray I think I don't even know if thats how to spell the name but if I was doing a version of "If You Get There Before I do" I would have said that it's a version of that song but it's not a version of that song cause' this wasn't even written to a beat I wrote during school for the song and poetry section of the school newspaper.
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Postby HAYZI » Jan 14th, '06, 20:04

damn that was great EP, you touch me everytime u rite sumin :'(
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Postby Ivy » Jan 15th, '06, 15:29

I meant no offence, I was just questioning the song. You're right, Collan Ray. But that was just my opinion.
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 15th, '06, 17:56

taylorakatiggi wrote:I meant no offence, I was just questioning the song. You're right, Collan Ray. But that was just my opinion.


sry I was in a bad mood yesterday I just read wat I said to u I didn't mean to take my anger out on u but yea I didn't notice it but it does flow well with the song mabey I'll use the beat to Collan Ray's song when I recoed it
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Postby Ivy » Jan 16th, '06, 00:49

That would be pretty tight, it'd be original.
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 16th, '06, 01:33

taylorakatiggi wrote:That would be pretty tight, it'd be original.


yea rapping to a country beat would be pretty tight
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Postby Ivy » Jan 16th, '06, 18:51

I've never heard any artist rapping to a country beat, it'd be tight plus I think it would be original and hard to compete with.
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