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** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

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** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 15:56

fresh out the lab haha...
hope ya can enjoy it...

C-Riz - Always On The Run
http://www.zshare.net/audio/669424518db3ec7f/

critism appreciated....and all other kinds of feed :flower:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby D'Leh » Oct 14th, '09, 16:50

man i really enjoy it good shit homie keep it up!!! :y:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 16:59

thank you homie :flower:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby D'Leh » Oct 14th, '09, 17:04

check my last drop if you wann is called Punchline
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 14th, '09, 17:07

lol man , i liked it it's sick as ususal , i liked the girl thing which is singing wit ya ,, good shit,, lyrics are cool man,, beat is hype and cool , overall, great track my bro ,, keep them comming :)
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 17:11

thanks b..... :worship: the girl is just a sample from the beat i looped.. :)
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 14th, '09, 17:11

Damn Rizzy :worship:
this tune is a banger :worship: :worship:
can't wait to hear some more new stuff from you :b:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 14th, '09, 19:57

the beat is simply amazing, excelent job on that

I like the vibe on this song a lot, something I could listen to a lot, definitively loved this
flow = flawless
Rhymes = flawless
Style = Unique

I like the sample in the hook, plus the concept of the song is amazing

this is good music :worship: :y:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 20:09

mucho propoz guys :worship:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby Tash8 » Oct 14th, '09, 20:10

wow sick song bro, no joke, ur flow is flawless on this, lyrics are cool.. though the overlays got a bit annoying, you know? idk

but good song bro!
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 14th, '09, 20:12

thanks on pointing it out...guess i need to work harder on them... :y:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 15th, '09, 19:59

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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby enjinn » Oct 15th, '09, 22:48

man this beat is dope!!!...flow and lyrics are sick!!!...we really need to collab!
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 16th, '09, 12:35

thanks man...plus check your pm :y:
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Re: ** C-Riz - Always On The Run **

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 17th, '09, 01:35

rhyming is dope, so is the flow. pronunciation lacks sometimes but this is way better than your old shit.

not into the chorus, but it's not terrible.

flow stays good, rhyming stays good as well. falls off a bit right before the hook.

overall 7/10 due to the hook. solid verses, solid flow. you've definitely improved since i last heard you. good shit :y:
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