Scotty Boy - Sweetest Goodbye

[EminemIVLife]

this was more polished than your last track. U r getting more confident but ur accent does sound weird at times tbh. Its actually quite sweet i can see ladies maybe diggin u for it; but at the same time for me its a little too emo u feel me? Like even kanye west is too emo for me but u are definetly showing signs of improvement: u shud drop a harder track now before that emo tag sticks

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

flow slips in couple spots
pronouncation and delievery are kind of worse than your other track..
waitin for the re recorded version

[EminemIVLife]

i would agree that your pronunciation let u down a bit in this track. Delivery would be delivering each of your words with the same emphasis and yeah, pronouncing the words properly.

[Le Tunisien]

btw can sum1 clarify what delivery actually means lol?

how to explain it,errr its just the way you pronounce the Rhymes , you gotta " deliver " your rhymes ,,,,
not sure
but something like that...
anyways,im lookin forward the diss

[Mr. Chambers]

delivery is the energy you put forth in your rhymes......fabolous has a "laid back" delivery......ppl like MOP have a "hyped up" delivery..........it all depends on your style of lyrics and your actual personality....keep writing.....don't try to be like anyone else...sooner or later your delivery will mold...almost without you noticing............

[Xray]

btw can sum1 clarify what delivery actually means lol?

how to explain it,errr its just the way you pronounce the Rhymes , you gotta " deliver " your rhymes ,,,,
not sure
but something like that...
anyways,im lookin forward the diss

You shitting me right? Motherfucker YOU don't even know what delivery is, if you did your wack ass tracks won't sound like your daddy is waiting for you to hop out that room so he can knock your ass out... This guy is the funniest motherfucker I've seen on this site. Who would of thought frogs can make jokes as good as that.

[classthe_king]

btw can sum1 clarify what delivery actually means lol?

how to explain it,errr its just the way you pronounce the Rhymes , you gotta " deliver " your rhymes ,,,,
not sure
but something like that...
anyways,im lookin forward the diss

You shitting me right? Motherfucker YOU don't even know what delivery is, if you did your wack ass tracks won't sound like your daddy is waiting for you to hop out that room so he can knock your ass out... This guy is the funniest motherfucker I've seen on this site. Who would of thought frogs can make jokes as good as that.

Why don't you tell him then

[Xray]

I would but I don't want to, cause he doesn't take music seriously, he does it for fun so let him do it for fun lol.

[classthe_king]

I would but I don't want to, cause he doesn't take music seriously, he does it for fun so let him do it for fun lol.

haha, makes sense.

[Slim Zaddy]

I would but I don't want to, cause he doesn't take music seriously, he does it for fun so let him do it for fun lol.

yeah it does,, hey SAJJAD bro ,, i dont see new music from you bro recently,, ,,,,,,,did you did anything new,, ,, if yeah ,,then i wannna hear them ^_^

and Scotty bro ,, i think it's cool as lyrics,, but yeah you gotta work on delivery ,, it's how you deliver the song for us, they way you rhyme words, exert emotions over the mic, raising or lowering your voice , how to pronounce certain words, scream or sing slow , etc............

[mcZu]

Yeah, definitly gotta work on that delivery Scotty boi. Flow was aight, lyrics are good and overall it's okay. You're recording more and more Keep it up.