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Smithy - Writers Block

Postby Element. » Oct 16th, '09, 23:37

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5D5Sjpfh44
Smithy - Writer Block
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No harsh comments and comment on youtube aswel
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby Element. » Oct 17th, '09, 15:54

Bump
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby enjinn » Oct 17th, '09, 19:26

your flow is nice but you try to fit in too many syllables at a few points...but just work a lil on your delivery...your vocals need to be louder on the hook...your lyrics are nice...all in all youll get better with time...keep rappin man
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 18th, '09, 22:56

You fucking suck. Nuff said.
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby classthe_king » Oct 18th, '09, 23:00

MC Anonymous wrote:You fucking suck. Nuff said.


No Harsh Comments [-X

For real though, that was not very good.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby Element. » Oct 20th, '09, 06:51

it was my first fkin rap... And everyone i know like it.
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby Element. » Oct 21st, '09, 21:44

Bump/
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 24th, '09, 00:06

MC Anonymous wrote:You fucking suck. Nuff said.

at least , he doesnt literally suck ,like you
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Postby Element. » Oct 24th, '09, 11:27

Lol
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Postby Element. » Oct 25th, '09, 12:18

BuMp!
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby AliJack » Oct 25th, '09, 13:15

LMFAO ANON THIS IS WHAT YOU SHOWED ME :laughing: I didn't know it was on the forum!
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Postby Element. » Oct 26th, '09, 00:03

Huh ???
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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 26th, '09, 02:00

Stop bumping this piece of shit.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Postby Tranquil » Oct 26th, '09, 02:21

MC Anonymous wrote:Stop bumping this piece of shit.

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Re: Smithy - Writers Block

Postby MoBrat » Oct 26th, '09, 05:34

not bad but u need to work on ur mixing ur vocals are to low compared to the beat flow falls off a few times n like enjinn said u try to fit to much in at certain points but not bad for ur first try :y:
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