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NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 28th, '09, 01:18

Just recoreded this today. It's the first single off my upcoming LP "Ready Or Not". I wrote the hook but that's Chris Chase singing it.

Any/All feedback is appreciated as always!

Steve Spag - Into The Dust.mp3 - 4.33MB

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Requiem » Oct 28th, '09, 01:38

it's an incredible beat, and ur lyrics are pretty catchy on this one. Ur delivery's a little too laidback for my taste, but still u flowed well.
Verse 1 was better than 2 imo, but the hook is catchy too.

overall nice track man :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Oct 28th, '09, 13:34

beat is crazy reminds of old dr dre beats,everything u did on this track was on point man,delivery flow lyrics for me no complains,and hook is very interesting,nice job man :worship:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 28th, '09, 15:42

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you're feeling this track!

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Almostlity » Oct 28th, '09, 15:44

Steve Spag > *



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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby classthe_king » Oct 28th, '09, 18:20

I thought this was a really dope track. Beat is pretty good. Lyrics were good, rhyming was great expecially on the first verse. Good shit.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 28th, '09, 18:49

The beat is wiked homie, wiked shit, chorus was real sickm had me hummin that shit even after the song finished
Verses were dope as well dude, first verse was ill, sick shit
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Emadyville » Oct 28th, '09, 19:41

Beats great, rhymes are solid you went real lyrical on the first verse which I liked, lyrics were strong; i like the flow switch on the second verse in the beginning, lyrics again are nice, again i liked how you switched the rhyme scheme and how it matched with the flow; third verse was solid as well.

The hook was good, kid did a good job on it. Only thing I think it lacked was a better delivery, you seem to always sound the same on your songs which becomes very mono toned-only word i can think to describe it, overall this was a solid drop tho. I think a little intro would been good cause the beats long before you start. Keep it up :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 28th, '09, 21:14

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Thanks for all the positive feedback guys! You know that your support and kindness don't go unnoitced!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 28th, '09, 21:45

nice beat, sounds anno domini or 2 deepish.... is good...
takes a while to start... Not a fan of that

I thought you were from the US, but your accent sounds diferent.... the lyrics are fire, I love them, makes me look more forward to that [spoiler] Hypnotized collab [][]...

I like the hook, that dude sings well, its nice...

do you record on studio???... this has great quality, if you don't I'll ask you on msn bout the effect list

verse 1 is the best, I like the whole song tho'... great job, looking forward to that album :worship:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 28th, '09, 22:56

^^
Thanks man, and no I'm not American, I'm from Canada.
And yes, I record in a studio.

And you were right about Anno Domini ;)
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 28th, '09, 23:50

ok.....

beat=dope....nothing needs to be said

i'm not gonan comment each verse but i liked the 2nd the most....

takes way too lnog to start..almost 50 seconds.........do something...throw some bars in there......

delivery...you sound exactly like this other canadian rapper i talk to.......least for this song.....i've heard you do different deliveries...but yer!!!

lyrics were straight.......nothing bad ot say really...

flow was solid...nice steady pace.....i liked the chorus as is.....

overall the song came out real.....old skoolish....i dunno if thats what you was aiming for....but thats how i saw it...or underground....i could hear this being played in like 1995 or some shit......

anyways thats my feedback......keep dropping :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 29th, '09, 18:20

chambers wrote:ok.....

beat=dope....nothing needs to be said

i'm not gonan comment each verse but i liked the 2nd the most....

takes way too lnog to start..almost 50 seconds.........do something...throw some bars in there......

delivery...you sound exactly like this other canadian rapper i talk to.......least for this song.....i've heard you do different deliveries...but yer!!!

lyrics were straight.......nothing bad ot say really...

flow was solid...nice steady pace.....i liked the chorus as is.....

overall the song came out real.....old skoolish....i dunno if thats what you was aiming for....but thats how i saw it...or underground....i could hear this being played in like 1995 or some shit......

anyways thats my feedback......keep dropping :y:

Thanks a lot man! That's an interesting way to look at it, and I never really thought about it but I guess it does have a little old school feel to it, lol.

And yeah the intro is kinda long but I just wanted everyone to enjoy the beat itself for a bit.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby Tash8 » Oct 29th, '09, 23:56

listening

ok the intro of the song is wayyy too motherfuckin long, i'm bored....

i dont like the mixing of ur vocals... they're too dry... ur lyrics are cool, ur delivery is nice, but sometimes u slur "far ride, mark like a, smart guy, heart size" i like that scheme but it got boring quick...

chorus is weak, it can be great, but it's not idk what to say besides it's not up to its potential

second verse is the best.. good song

not really first single type thoug, it is catchy though
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Into The Dust

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 30th, '09, 13:27

flow is smoooth.....multies shine on this...
lyrics are kool too..mixing can be clearer tho
hook..umm i dont know....a sick idea sounding allright...when it should sound sick too :sweating:
verse 2 is delivery wise better than 1st :y:
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