C-Riz - Where Am I ..incl. Mixtape

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah guyz...been kind of busy last few weeks
plus my net been actin stupid...anywayz..
i got a mixtape recorded i did with a buddy and a solo side-track i recorded today

SwagBull Vol.1[MIXTAPE]
http://www.mediafire.com/?dqi2immmmoy

and the additional a solo track of yours truely

C-Riz - Where Am I
http://www.mediafire.com/?w0jxmqtjxmi
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6809384000c94745/

enjoy it folks

[_Ironic_]

yo bro, I ain't got the time to peep the full album but Im checkin out the individual track

production is nice on this, beat is smooth

1st verse) your recording skills improve everytime I hear you..it seems like you really took the advice I gave you to heart, and you smash the shit outta the park so BIG ups to that, its much easier to listen to you now cuz it sounds more professional, and theres not nearly as many errors.

the way you rode the beat on this is PERFECT, you hit the percussions as well as the clap, and that's impressive, adlibs were improved as well..lyrics wise pretty smooth..not doing too much but it's a good thing..it doesn't sound like you're trying to fit too much in, and it makes the enjoyability of the track much nicer...I like how ur verses were spread out and the singing came in as you rapped, it gave it a much more professional sound..overall man I really liked this. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, you're improving with every song you make and you got what it takes to make it big if u keep on with this type of work ethic

overall 8.5/10 imma keep lookin out for u c-riz, keep commin with that heat

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

shit thanks ronic yeah still thankful for ur adivce..

[Tornado]

SwagBull ? lol...who came up with that name

Gonna feed the tape seperatly

As for the track, there weren't anough syllables in your sentences so your flow was slighty stretched which also affected your delivery which was ok but it felt a bit off when you stretch words. Beat is nice and cool to jam to, lyrics are decent aswell, mixing is nice aswell. Overall, it's listenable but definite room for improvement. 7/10

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

haha thanks tornado...i doubt u will like the tape haha...my buddy made me do a lil mainstream-ish shit on it..so yea.. propz on checkin

[Xray]

Lmao @ "Put your lighters up if you want to" and than rain kicks in.

First verse, not bad, lyrics were simple as hell. Flow was average, delivery wasn't all that, probably cause of the mixing. Second verse, slightly better, but pretty much same as the first one, only line I liked was the last line, rest were average/nothing special. Third verse, again, same weak rhymes put on beat << that's all you really did. 5/10.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks ray ray as for my defense i wanted to dumb it down cuz local people had a hard time understanding my more or less bigger words..so i thought this could work locally...
but yeah i agree.tho 2nd was personal as fuck for me... anywayz thx again

[Tash8]

this song was really good, pretty catchy... mixing was real nice.. vocals could just be a bit louder.. 2nd verse was reall nice.. HATED the hook, like first half of it was annoying as fuck.. third verse got a bit corny.. "they don't give it to mmeeee"

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks tash

[B.A.D.]

Where Am I:

*puts lighter up*
nice beat choice, I like the hook
quality is pro , I like the lyrics plus you flow them really nice, verse 1 was really short, but it was good, pronunciation improvement on verse 2 , sad lyrics, great great track, still lovin the hook hahaha, who sings it??... again verse 3 is well done, very enjoyable track, one of your best short verses tho'... but they do the job well

nice thang man
high replay value

[_Ironic_]

Where Am I:

*puts lighter up*
nice beat choice, I like the hook
quality is pro , I like the lyrics plus you flow them really nice, verse 1 was really short, but it was good, pronunciation improvement on verse 2 , sad lyrics, great great track, still lovin the hook hahaha, who sings it??... again verse 3 is well done, very enjoyable track, one of your best short verses tho'... but they do the job well

nice thang man
high replay value

yeah I agree with what you said ax, this has a HIGH replay value, I've listened to it 4 or 5 times already. I dunno if it's just the girls singing on the hook... but chris adds good depth to the song

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz to you guys...glad ya like it

[Rapsoldier101]

I like it, I love the hook. Who sings it?

The lyrics in the song as a whole were pretty simple but smooth. I can tell you dumbed it down a little. Pronounciation could get a LITTLE better thats basically it though. And as you said, yea the second verse was pretty deep

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks man 'preciate it
and for everyone..i dont know who is singing the hook....came with the instrumental...and i ran wit it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

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