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BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

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BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 18th, '09, 18:30

This is the last song I do on my homecountry of Mexico, I want to share it with you... I really hope you like it, I put a lot of effort in this song, plus it has a lot of meaning to me... I go out of the country in 5 days... (sunday)... so... this is my last piece on there.... cuz i won't stop making music :worship:

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Produced by: Big Ax-D

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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby BILI » Nov 18th, '09, 18:43

Ima definitely check this :y:
when are you movin??
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 18th, '09, 19:20

1st verse was allright...weird pronouncation at spots..also delivery was pretty monotone
hook has a nice feel to it....you should let some darker/deeper strings go with your deeper singing..cuz imo the high strings sound a bit out of place in there...
2nd verse had a nice delivery again...was better...flow was nuttin amazing but u kept it decent...
kool track...cant wait to hear that blitznext stuff :shifty:
have a good one :y:

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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby BILI » Nov 18th, '09, 20:06

Nice song man,first verse is ok,but I like 2nd more :y:
Hook is fuckin awesome I like it the most,I really dig it,Every song,every rhyme.......dope :worship:
Overall nice song I like it
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 18th, '09, 22:20

the hook is fucking awesome...i love it :smoking: :worship:
verse 2 was the best,
the delivery was dope :y:
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby _Ironic_ » Nov 18th, '09, 22:43

beat is pretty nuts..but its hot

flow was on point with the beat..so :y: to that. im not feelin the delivery mostly cuz of the pronunciation, but its not bad.

hook is HOT, nice use of overlays.

lyrics were nice but at times hard to understand cuz of accent. I got a sense of eminem at points here (stick to originality)..

again, hook is very well done, so big props for increasing the replay value.

overall 7/10...keep droppin, dont be gone for too long!
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby DelinQuent » Nov 19th, '09, 06:49

beat is pretty nice, good job

flow is nice, rhyming is steady and good. lyrics are decent, not my style. end of the verse was nice.

hook, at first didn't like it, grew on me a bit, still not stunning.

second verse starts strong, im feeling this. delivery is a bit awkward around bar 4 or so. flow picks up toward the middle/end, DOPE. again, dope ending.

overall 8/10, a great track to leave on.

You going on vacation or are you moving? either way, enjoy it and have fun.
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby randomghost » Nov 19th, '09, 15:14

WOW fav. track of the year :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: fuckin amaziing beat...nice hook..lyrics and flow is amazing :y: luv it 10/10....btw where u movin 2? :p
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 19th, '09, 17:47

wow,, damn ,, bro,, i liked it alot ,, really ,,, particularly ,, verse,, 2, , it's fucking amazing,, keep it up ,, man ,
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 19th, '09, 17:52

thanks to everyone for your comments, greatly appreciated :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

really means a lot to me :worship: :worship: :flower: :flower: :flower: :y: :y: :y:

I'm moving to Melbourne, Australia... for a long long time so.... this is my goodbye song to mexico :worship: :y: :b: :b: :smoking:
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby Kez » Nov 19th, '09, 18:51

I love this song, just everything about it, especially the beat and the hook.

Brilliant, in my opinion.
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 20th, '09, 04:00

By far my favorite Big Ax-D song :worship:
the verses were....very impressive :flower:
that hook is off the chain too :worship:
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby gutawafang » Nov 20th, '09, 04:06

Nice.

Perfect beat for the voice. Dope flow and delivery as usual. :worship:
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby Xray » Nov 20th, '09, 05:21

Beat was pretty nice man, good job. First verse was cool, I liked it, but the second verse was more of my shit, love that verse. Hook was catchy, it had a cool vibe to it, didn't like it too much but I don't hate it. Good track man, not my fav track, you've got way better tracks, but yeah pretty good. :y:
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Re: BIG AX-D - DEPARTURE

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 20th, '09, 18:44

thanks a lot for the feeds, amazingly appreciated, thanks to everyone again for the postive comments, I'm glad ya'll liked it :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: ... greatly greatly appreciated :8) :y: :y: :flower: :flower: :flower: :worship: :smoking:
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