(We) Party-Inn (Feat. Big Ax-D) - Tash8

[Tash8]

Listen:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/68709257d10baabc/

Lyrics:
[singing]
I'm in, getting in my mode
downing these drinks, think it's time to go
gotta get in 'fore this thang close
then you know, we headed to the motel

smoking homegrowns, cali brew i suppose
and incase ya'll don't know, i'm a lyrical drone
what you hear? you wont know,
should you fear? I would guess so
cause sometimes i get so, schizo-phrenic
it's close to taking over, you say "please don't let it"
cause you seen it before and it made you seem so pathetic
just embed it, in your head, yep and never let it again
affect us and smoke another blunt for the ex
cause it's best bet to rid of all problems
alcohol bottles, handles, six feet tall models
depletes all sorrows, at least till tomorrow
when reality's horror, and you only live once so live it up
you'll regret it if not, but yo, you can
do what you wanna but incase you need help
i'll be looking, just holler for a taste of these tips
--till we're tiipppsssy, and sharing few hits

[singing]
I'm in, getting in my mode
downing these drinks, think it's time to go
gotta get in 'fore this thang close
then you know, we headed to the motel
I'm in, getting in my mode
downing these drinks, think it's time to go
gotta get in 'fore this thang close
then you know, we headed to the motel


sip my pain away with a bottle of patron
we're here to have fun, leave the trouble at home
--baby i ain't looking for a Marley and Me,
--i'm seeking a barbie that will party with me
that's me being real, g, we always flying high
--peaking down the sky where these muhafuckin birds be
you better hide your pride, spare yourself from surgery
I switch up my flow, move swift like the fantastic four
you ready for a show? man i'm always making one
and i'm hardly breathin, hit me with cpr
show me where the D.D.'s are
start vibing to music, no more excuses
watching the pretty girls turning whore and stupid
fuck a party foul, if you gonnna be douche, kid,
then you can move along cause we here to act stupid,
so sing along with this song for your own amusement

Thanks for the feedback!

[classthe_king]

Beat was hot, chorus was extremely catchy. Since it was a club song i will judge it as a club song. The lyrics were good, from both Tash and Big-Ax D. I was actually boppin my head to Tash's second verse. This was just an overall good club song, extremely catchy.

[DƎRDYPK]

I like this
your verses are nice they suit the beat perfectly
your flow stays improving too
just finished the 1st listen...gonna give it a listen 3 or 4 more times
what I like the most about this track is it's a chill smooth party feel
your 2nd verse is real nice...best flow i'v heard from you
Big Ax-D fills the 3rd verse perfectly...he's good at working with club songs so...

overall this is a very good track
keep dropping

[gutawafang]

Some words int he lyrics aren't said out.

But yeah, the delivery is dope.

Flow perfect.

[Robbie G]

wow wow wow

This song was catchy as fuck for me. I loved the beat, not sure if it was yours but it was dope. Your flow was crazy on this song and I can definitely tell your improving. To be honest I wasn't expecting too much but this is going on my ipod.

[Tash8]

thanks guys that means a lot.

[Xray]

Beat is garbage. Hook was extremely commercial/wack. Your verses were messy as fuck, flow was all over the place, slurred most of your words, flow was falling off everywhere, and the mixing was seriously horrible. You made Ax-D's verse sound like he recorded with a $1 microphone, same with your vocals. What effects/chain are you using? cause its garbage...

Didn't feel this song, shit was a cheap attempt at a commercial song.

[Tash8]

good beat, catchy chorus, real club feel, i can hear radio play, i like your flow, simple lyrics but it rides the beat well, great mixing and quality, your almost impeccable just you sound kinda lifeless like a drone, love the chorus even more a 2nd time, 2nd verse's flow is even better, more energy, chorus again , Big's verse is pretty nice, the flow kinda fell of once or twice but not by much, still really nice

really like this, good replay value, and this is the kinda song that will get you noticed by non hip-hoppers also

thanks man but what does this mean
"your almost impeccable just you sound kinda lifeless like a drone"

Beat is garbage. Hook was extremely commercial/wack. Your verses were messy as fuck, flow was all over the place, slurred most of your words, flow was falling off everywhere, and the mixing was seriously horrible. You made Ax-D's verse sound like he recorded with a $1 microphone, same with your vocals. What effects/chain are you using? cause its garbage...

Didn't feel this song, shit was a cheap attempt at a commercial song.

i knew you'd hate this song, it's ok i prepared for this...

[Xray]

Beat is garbage. Hook was extremely commercial/wack. Your verses were messy as fuck, flow was all over the place, slurred most of your words, flow was falling off everywhere, and the mixing was seriously horrible. You made Ax-D's verse sound like he recorded with a $1 microphone, same with your vocals. What effects/chain are you using? cause its garbage...

Didn't feel this song, shit was a cheap attempt at a commercial song.

i knew you'd hate this song, it's ok i prepared for this...

Sorry if my feedback was a little harsh, but its really sad seeing you work on commercial beats, come on man you can do way better than that trendy bullshit, don't do the radio, do you! Make something original, create your own style in both flow and content and lyrical ability. That's what makes you successful, originality. Not that common predictable "radio" bullshit, if you look at it closely, how many tracks has Game made that are commercial/radio songs? But did those songs make him famous? No. He can turn into a Kanye West and start throwing love signs and start dating bald bitches and people would still be yelling out "Documentary".

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

as i said beat was kool..flow was catchy..only critism your adlibs...there are too quiet at times...
hook as i said...nice voice but could be a better tho..but doesnt effect you lol
ax-d came nice on it...tho i felt like i rushed his mixing in there
but yeah nice track....

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

Sorry if my feedback was a little harsh, but its really sad seeing you work on commercial beats, come on man you can do way better than that trendy bullshit, don't do the radio, do you! Make something original, create your own style in both flow and content and lyrical ability. That's what makes you successful, originality. Not that common predictable "radio" bullshit, if you look at it closely, how many tracks has Game made that are commercial/radio songs? But did those songs make him famous? No. He can turn into a Kanye West and start throwing love signs and start dating bald bitches and people would still be yelling out "Documentary".

yo sajjad i write this cuz i dont wanna mess up tash's thread...but had to get my thought across..
oh and dont really wanna argue either..i know you point of view and i agree mostly
but even if its sad...you need to do some public shit to get attention these days...i mean once you done a track for the public you can prove afterwards how skilled you are..but get with the time

[Tash8]

Sorry if my feedback was a little harsh, but its really sad seeing you work on commercial beats, come on man you can do way better than that trendy bullshit, don't do the radio, do you! Make something original, create your own style in both flow and content and lyrical ability. That's what makes you successful, originality. Not that common predictable "radio" bullshit, if you look at it closely, how many tracks has Game made that are commercial/radio songs? But did those songs make him famous? No. He can turn into a Kanye West and start throwing love signs and start dating bald bitches and people would still be yelling out "Documentary".

it's not even man! I'm doing this for myself... yes I like to party, when I go to party and drink and go crazy I dont' want to hear underground songs, I wanna hear song like this.. you know what yes i'm making a song like this but at least you can appreciate my rhyming schemes or something.. I mean content and production are only part of a song.. and how am i not being creative, if anything my lyrics are the only thing that are keeping this song from being a complete lack of originality?

"--baby i ain't looking for a Marley and Me,
--i'm seeking a barbie that will party with me"

I feel like those two lines basically sum up my point.. yes i'm talking about having fun and mention party but look at the rhyming and the metaphor in that line.

but I get your point, at this time in my life i feel this is what represents me.. I'm in college, this is my first quarter in college, people say it calms down after the first quarter, so maybe i wont be in the party mode after a few weeks, I dunno

but thanks a lot of the feed everyone, now before we screw up my topic, let's focus on the music!

[B.A.D.]

dude, my verse was awfully mixed.... thats why I hate when other people mix my verses, sounds weak and bad... Makes me sound like trash... .... can u re-upload it with the mixing I did, cuz my verse sounds HORRIBLE!!!

your second verse is great , I like the flow, although you made more playing on verse 1, like diferent ways to rhyme and stuff, but its really good, I enjoyed both of your verses on the track. the hook is good and the beat is great. I think the only thing bad about this track is the mixing of my verse bcuz it was not at all supposed to sound like this. anyways, thanks for letting me in, I enjoyed writting to it

[Jay-19]

This is a pretty good party track man, reallt nice mood to it.
Lyrics are nice for this type of song, doesn't have to be all complex and shit. I like 'em!
Only "problem" I have with this one is your flow at some parts, but just ittybitty parts, you did very well.
You improved as hell since the last time I heard you.
Hook is veeeeeeeeeeeery nice man, best thing about the track.

Big Ax-D did good too, as always.


Nothing else to say but good fucking track bros!

[Slimm]

Awesome track man, the hook was very fucking dope! It does sound very mainstream and clubbish but thats not always a bad thing.
Cant really feed on the rhymes or anything but the beat and hook were dope, and you got a great voice for rapping imo.