First beat

[cityfan31]

Yeah I made this beat over the last week or so, havn't really thought of an ending for it yet, but any feedback/ideas would be cool! was trying to go for an emotional feel, but its my first attempt so yeah!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/68753749fc4ae99e/

[Requiem]

not bad for ur first beat. I really like the instrument choice there. the drums are a little soft, but i like the overall tone...
nice.... what program did u use?

[cityfan31]

cheers yeah the drums are a bit shit. I put the volume of them to the maximum but maybe i need to make the other parts quieter..

I used fruity loops 9!

[Hadez]

the piano melody doesn't go with any of the other ones. its off a couple notes. but the patterns are nice. especially during the chorus. you should try switchin up the beat from time to time though. the melodies were the same. no introduction of new melodies till the chorus. you added stuff to the drum pattern periodically but nothing that substantial.

good for a first beat.