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Postby HAYZI » Jul 14th, '05, 12:40

i flow so cold its frozen
rip you wide-eyed mcs right open
lowest degree? come on you're 2 for a penny
many emcees'll pick you apart, in fact any
why you picking on darjan?- cos you kno deep in your
belly
you cant hack it, faggit, with hayzi, fordie or 30-3
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 13:15

So,you two are trying to put me down-BUT YOU WILL NEVER SUCCEED
I will always recover and make ya bleed....so proceed....
Rap soldier,your freestyles are not rap-they are for ballet
You have no love,you don
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 14th, '05, 13:38

beach blonde hair, rappin thinkin your eminem
need a wake up call, you make a fool look cool put down your pen
i thought you bought my line about, you tried no pride dont try again,
you must be mad im glad you had a stab amusing me and all of them
telling me to quit you prick yeh im new to hip hop rhymes and battling
but im an mc i leave any one of you in your cages rattling
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 14:22

Well,if you dont wanna listen to my advice,i
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 14th, '05, 14:35

is that your bitch in your picture or you wish bet its your sister
well woteva da weather i already fucked her till she blistered
de ja vu? well here comes round 2
thought any good lyrics lately cos surely now ones due
your bound 2
me spitting venoms why you pissed and it bled
since battling me you kno wish you were dead
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 14:49

That was my bitch on the picture,and she told me your little secret!
You have smallest dick on earth and she was very sad on her birth!
Your rhymes don
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 14th, '05, 15:14

i dont make sense? 'she was sad on her birth'
what the fuck is that it shoulda been, your girth was even worse
a 'sword trick' a 'work shoe' use your brain and be witty
like, ive just stopped fucking your girl sideways cos her head went all giddy
go and practice on your raps kid thats a hint bruv hope you catch it
like how i caught crabs of your girl, you been scratching?
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 15:21

You can
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 14th, '05, 15:43

you think you winning? wot tha fuck you been drinkin
and wot 'song', wot you singin? plus your bitchs fucking mingin
and i saw your rap on tha otha topic ne fool knos thats written
and it wasnt even good for a freestyle in my humble opinion
sorry i took long iwas sorting out my money for angermanagement 3
to pay my ticket i hope you havent ne


^actually was doing that not just a lame ass lyric
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Postby walend » Jul 14th, '05, 17:31

Grow up watch your dick an think what you can do with it,
you can have a go with it and put it in a Granny Smith
Are maybe your like a woman and you have a little tit
just bounce it on the floor an record it as a belittle skit
yea jounce, and pronounce, the two kids of the forum.....

Sorry if you don't understand me but i'm Dutch, and i have to go now
Peace 8)

Greetz from Belgium !!!
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Postby B.A.D. » Jul 14th, '05, 20:09

Ayo Darjan & Hayzi

Lol

want sum of this??

you buth wack, let it go, stop that attack
you can't do rap, ayo Fordie, pass me that gat
cuz ama bout to blow this bitches head
you can't reply to this, why? cuz u dead
ayo Hayzi, no one cares if you was buyin a ticket
leave rap muthafucka go play cricket
you spittin venoms? don't shit me
I'm the one that enthralls you spittin
you just an entertainer that ain't funny
u like a turlte, Darjan's a bunny
insolent bitch, this the last time I reply
wack, if he says he murders me, Its a lie
ayo hayzi u dissed urself in 90% of your shit
cuz you ain't killin no one with your spit
40-3 you must be kiddin me
cuz ain't no one better than 30-3
hey Darjan.. I fell from a the tree
you bitch fell in rappin thanx to me
fix ur shit cuz its grungy, wack as fuck
u proly don't know the basics, u stuck
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 14th, '05, 20:52

i know when i need to stop.I am sick of this.This guy 30-3 is talkin bad things for me,but he is the greatest!
Fuck me,fuck HAYZI, fuck everybody!30-3 is the best!PROPZ man! :lol:
I am quitting now!!!
30-3-you rock!!!
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Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jul 15th, '05, 01:19

DARJAN333 wrote:i know when i need to stop.I am sick of this.This guy 30-3 is talkin bad things for me,but he is the greatest!
Fuck me,fuck HAYZI, fuck everybody!30-3 is the best!PROPZ man! :lol:
I am quitting now!!!
30-3-you rock!!!


naw bitch you just cant say my name and stop,
you is such a fag get the fuck off of 30-3's cock,
i'll pop darjan333 like pop rocks,
take my gun off safety now im walkin down your block,
im a soldier in this game peep the name you freakin lame,
mentioning me in a battle, bitch you dug your own grave,

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Postby HAYZI » Jul 15th, '05, 15:48

hittin-you quick like jet of lit propane
comin straight for your brain like its cocaine
i gonna hit-it-the-minute you cum thru
cos i bring-it-to-tha-limit you woulnt but sum do
your under pressure, no one can tes'-ma, lyrical flows
im hittin you hoes, wiv riddles dat be splittin your nose
30-3 and rap soldier i told ya im the man for-the mic
leave you wussy-pussies behind me while you stand and recite
now-its my plan to ignite-and-youll be my fans by tonite
cos ill tie my hand to the mic and slap you man, like a dyke
any doubters out there then im doubting your sanity
without the use of profanity proved none-of-you bitches can handle me
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Postby 4D » Jul 21st, '05, 15:56

Pack in ya cause, it`s weak n it`s fake, it`s wack n it`s false.
You faggits thought you was safe but i`m crackin ya vaults
Prankin ya calls, have you shittin like laxative salts
your disses are pleasin, i`m dealin attacks n assaults
lyrical not literal but it`s a contractual clause,
it`s unlawful illegal, lethal n awful, a smack in da balls.


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