Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

[classthe_king]

As the World Burns

[Solace]

what.

[classthe_king]

Thats what the beat is called, i figured it out.

[Solace]

I see.

[classthe_king]

up

[Mr. Chambers]

flow was shakey throughout...and like some1 else said in this thread....it really did seem liek you was fighting to stay on beat more then just letting it come out.....your chorus wasn't aligned with the chorus section of the song.....i'm 98% sure you didn't do that on purpose...so you might wanna fix that.....the voice tbh...was really...meh.......

if yo want my honest opinion...you try too hard to be eminem...from the content/style down to the voice...you can't help the voice...but the way you deliver your shit..you can tell your trying to mimic him...just try to do some different shit...switch it up...i dunno......

[Requiem]

flow was shakey throughout...and like some1 else said in this thread....it really did seem liek you was fighting to stay on beat more then just letting it come out.....your chorus wasn't aligned with the chorus section of the song.....i'm 98% sure you didn't do that on purpose...so you might wanna fix that.....the voice tbh...was really...meh.......

if yo want my honest opinion...you try too hard to be eminem...from the content/style down to the voice...you can't help the voice...but the way you deliver your shit..you can tell your trying to mimic him...just try to do some different shit...switch it up...i dunno......

holy fuck u destroyed my dreams

just kiddin dude thanks for the honest feed!

btw i was in NO way trying to imitate eminem, i haven't and will never imitate him ever again. not since the ice killa ep.... the only reason i came across as that is because i have a high pitched voice and i tried to hit a flow i was DEFINITELY not ready for

[Tash8]

flow was shakey throughout...and like some1 else said in this thread....it really did seem liek you was fighting to stay on beat more then just letting it come out.....your chorus wasn't aligned with the chorus section of the song.....i'm 98% sure you didn't do that on purpose...so you might wanna fix that.....the voice tbh...was really...meh.......

if yo want my honest opinion...you try too hard to be eminem...from the content/style down to the voice...you can't help the voice...but the way you deliver your shit..you can tell your trying to mimic him...just try to do some different shit...switch it up...i dunno......

i really like you and I can't wait to hear your opinions over my tracks man.. you tell it how it is!!

i agree what he says, you're like the closest thing to eminem i've ever heard.. but it's ok... chorus is cool man... the thing about this song is there's nothing that sounds out though... your flow isn't bad it falls off every once in a while.. U keep mentioning celebrities and u didn't expect to be compared to em? you def sound like 2009 eminem.

[Requiem]

flow was shakey throughout...and like some1 else said in this thread....it really did seem liek you was fighting to stay on beat more then just letting it come out.....your chorus wasn't aligned with the chorus section of the song.....i'm 98% sure you didn't do that on purpose...so you might wanna fix that.....the voice tbh...was really...meh.......

if yo want my honest opinion...you try too hard to be eminem...from the content/style down to the voice...you can't help the voice...but the way you deliver your shit..you can tell your trying to mimic him...just try to do some different shit...switch it up...i dunno......

i really like you and I can't wait to hear your opinions over my tracks man.. you tell it how it is!!

i agree what he says, you're like the closest thing to eminem i've ever heard.. but it's ok... chorus is cool man... the thing about this song is there's nothing that sounds out though... your flow isn't bad it falls off every once in a while.. U keep mentioning celebrities and u didn't expect to be compared to em? you def sound like 2009 eminem.

i know man...
looking at it now i get it, but when i made it i had no intention of sounding like eminem. how come anyone who makes sick rhymes with celebrities is automatically eminem?
it's all good tho, because it gives me alot of honest feed and i can use it to sculpt myself to sound unique

[Solace]

. how come anyone who makes sick rhymes with celebrities is automatically eminem?

Because Eminem makes sick rhymes with celebrities. Doesn't help either that you died your hair blonde, you had the whole Kid Kaniff thing going on before, you're white (not your fault lol) and you're an Eminem fan.

[_Ironic_]

holy fuck u destroyed my dreams

just kiddin dude thanks for the honest feed!

btw i was in NO way trying to imitate eminem, i haven't and will never imitate him ever again. not since the ice killa ep.... the only reason i came across as that is because i have a high pitched voice and i tried to hit a flow i was DEFINITELY not ready for

oxymoron much?

"i wasn't trying to imitate him, and I haven't..but i'll never imitate him again..." sounds to me like you knew you copied his style.

[Solace]

holy fuck u destroyed my dreams

just kiddin dude thanks for the honest feed!

btw i was in NO way trying to imitate eminem, i haven't and will never imitate him ever again. not since the ice killa ep.... the only reason i came across as that is because i have a high pitched voice and i tried to hit a flow i was DEFINITELY not ready for

oxymoron much?

"i wasn't trying to imitate him, and I haven't..but i'll never imitate him again..." sounds to me like you knew you copied his style.

Talk about exposed.

[Requiem]

u fuckers know what i mean

I WILL NOT BITE HIM AGAIN... better for you simple minded fucks?



that was a little harsh

and btw solace i'm a natural blonde

[Solace]

Is that why your hair used to be brown now it's blonde?

[Requiem]

Is that why your hair used to be brown now it's blonde?

no that's why my hair used to be blonde now its brown