Bar - Ready Steady Go (Produced By Mart85)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

so yeh, me and mart85 are back in buisness working on some songs. new people wont know but me n mart85 worked together alot a while ago but then i went away and we sorta stopped but i got in touch with him and he has some excellent beats ill be working on, and i mean amazing beats and as everyone knows all my best tracks, quality lyrics and flow wise, are all produced by mart85, his beats and work ethnit always make me try that bit harder.

this is the first track i have to show you all.

Ready Steady Go (Produced By mart85)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/69766675b50015fa/

The track is showing im ready to take that leap from, small town, perfoming in pubs, internet rapper to a full blown 24/7 artist.


got to list the credits here

Produced Mixed And Mastered By mart85
Written By Bar And Kez (Kez wrote the chorus thanks for the help man)

feedback would be appreciated on the track in a whole, my parts, and also the beat and mixing.

i rap faster and understand my accent plus up beat rapping may not sit well with alot of people so here are the lyrics.

Chorus
never quiver, i hold the mic steady
constantly alert every single rhyme ready
meditating all the time to get my mind ready
you cant deny im ready, ready steady
never quiver, i hold the mic steady
constantly alert every single rhyme ready
meditating all the time to get my mind ready
you cant deny im ready, steady go!


Verse 1
i got mad spits with hatricks doin backflips and card tricks am magic
tragic, if dont make it look but dont take it
choke but dont rape it no im naw dane it
this iz bar but ill respeond to what you name it
just a juvenille deliquent look quick think
how can i spitting this sick if im not in lip sync ( not in lyp sinc)
got my ready break ready with the break downs steady
flowing across so light while im wiriting lines heavy
always been a little different know a little more potent
every since i sneezed and kept both my eyes open
im naw joking im the illest groping eloping lesbians gays and bi's
still not controverisal on the 100th try i wonder why
this track is not a lie

Verse 2
coz no less i show best with progress
wanne meet me, travel go west
there no test a unravel flows best
im quicker im sicker and i drink more liqour
im read to blow soembodies cocked my trigger
im soaking up skill hoping a blowing up still
but not worried coz im knowing a will
just by showing im ill (bar rapping ? yeh he is still)
check back the wack raps like tampax
reaching heights no trainers when i air max
best bet burds desperate when they get wet
i want a little bit a comfort a go get
best bits they dont even fucking know yet
forcseps round your head, fuck me four steps or dead
i go get the head after that get ready for bed
well said

Verse 3
im laughing adapting the rapping trapped in the wack bin
a like this game ill never know what will happin
end up slapping all the wanne be mc's
want real rap then i suggest you send me
nobody help me dont care sell me
i mean buy me, everybody try me
im rated so highly (i dont beileive that, well neither do i see)
but im back not wack, all intact with the track that has got back
taped and mastered
my train on the lines leave the tracks in tatters
you dont beileive that i leave your back in plasters
finally beileived as the rhming lord
plugged in through my throat and a vinyal chord
in the battles i rip out your spinal chord
now do you see why i think im god ?

[SajN]

Man, that beat is sick

Your lyrics are sick, some dope stuff I liked 2nd verse.
I dig the hook too.

Only problem must be the scottish accent, but there's nothing you can do with that. It doesn't make the track bad though.
And I know you're probably tired of hearing that lol
There's nothing really negative I can say here, I enjoyed it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Man, that beat is sick

Your lyrics are sick, some dope stuff I liked 2nd verse.
I dig the hook too.

Only problem must be the scottish accent, but there's nothing you can do with that. It doesn't make the track bad though.
And I know you're probably tired of hearing that lol
There's nothing really negative I can say here, I enjoyed it

thanks man, yeh i think the secone verse shines most n this aswell, weird thing is, the first and 3rd verses were mostly wrote to the beat when i first heard the beat. the second verse was created mostly by taking 2-4 bars out of my rhyme book and puting them together to flow lol. thanks again man

:o i never knew you were this good. i thought this was great, the flow was great. and i didn't mind the scottish accent at all, it made me nostalgic, (half my family live up there) nice track, seriously. looking forward to hearing more from you.

haha thanks man appreciate it yeh alot of my tracks mixing lets me down ALOT and i know when writing songs that i aint going to get the polished sound and it annoys me, but when i workwith mart i know whatever i do is goin to sound extremely polished so it always inspires me. expect alot more of me and him collaborating. and thanks again man

[Vettori]

awsome beat for you..i liked it for the most part.. chorus was wicked haha, first part of it sounded better, cause it followed the beat strong. first verse, the begging had a few wierd things said...But i loved the flow haha.. verse 2 is wicked. , haha third verse, the topic wasn't held together that well, but was there enough to understand... had to think about stuff, But hey Enjoyed the song from start to finish haha...


Good shit man cant wait to hear the next one

[Tash8]

great song

you need to work on your pronunciation, and i'm not even talking about the accents, sometimes you slur up your words, so fix that..

great job bar, def ur best track in a while

and mart, omg i just orgasmed over that beat, damn it man, great beat..

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

awsome beat for you..i liked it for the most part.. chorus was wicked haha, first part of it sounded better, cause it followed the beat strong. first verse, the begging had a few wierd things said...But i loved the flow haha.. verse 2 is wicked. , haha third verse, the topic wasn't held together that well, but was there enough to understand... had to think about stuff, But hey Enjoyed the song from start to finish haha...


Good shit man cant wait to hear the next one

thanks man, anything weird you dont get ill be happy to clear up, i did use a couple of phrases you might not be familiar with like "hattricks" by the way i pronounce it may make people think i mean "hat tricks", but im talking about a hattrick you score in football (soccer)

but thanx man, i still find it weird how the second verse turned out best when it was the "chopped together" verse lol imma try this writing style more often seems to work nice.

great song

you need to work on your pronunciation, and i'm not even talking about the accents, sometimes you slur up your words, so fix that..

great job bar, def ur best track in a while

and mart, omg i just orgasmed over that beat, damn it man, great beat..

thanx man and yeh marts beat is awesome, this aint even the best one he showed me he got some killers man, and yeh im still working on the pronouncation, if you ever notice a pattern of what words and sounds i slur help me out by pointing it out, its hard for me or anyone i know to pick up on it because its just the way we speak, scots are known for speaking fast and jamming words together so i get used to the slurr sound just bein the wae it sounds lol its hard to pick up on it . mart sayed to me about the fiill in on verse 3 sounding slurred but i cant hear it lol

[B.A.D.]

its very hard for me to listen to any music in this days, since I don't have a computer and I'm still settling down, but soon I will be able to hear everybody's new work... by now, I had to go with this one, cuz well, in my expirience in the past years... Bar + Mart = Amazing

what I loved the most about this song is that I enjoyed it a lot, I was dancing to it with my headphones hahaha, this is the type of rap that I like to hear on my ipod, so when i can download it I will.... the mixing is top quality, makes listening to bar more easy and more enjoyable, definitively mart, youre a fucking genious with the mixing and mastering, cant' wait for you remix on "Freedom", also the beat is.... what can I say.... I wish i could produce like you... but well, thats why I came all the way to australia for hahahaha.... overall, I love it.... the mixing is perfect, the beat is pèrfect, hook is unique (btw, kez youre a genious on that), verses are amazing even if their hard to understand, but with the lyrics is helpfull.... simply greatness

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

... Bar + Mart = Amazing

word to that
sick track...flow is very upbeat and u did great man...plus mart drags the extra 10% out of you
flow is magic so is the beat.... but tbh its not the right track for me to listen to these days haha
but from a technical point is a goooooooooood job

[classthe_king]

This beat is sick of course. Im pretty much with everyone else that has posted. Your flow is great and even with your accent your delivery sounds great. I could clearly understand each word. Most of the people with accents on here i can't understand what the say half the time. The lyrics are good to. I can see myself playing this track alot. Keep it up.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

@ax-d , thanks man glad you liked it

@c-riz , thanks man

This beat is sick of course. Im pretty much with everyone else that has posted. Your flow is great and even with your accent your delivery sounds great. I could clearly understand each word. Most of the people with accents on here i can't understand what the say half the time. The lyrics are good to. I can see myself playing this track alot. Keep it up.

thanks man always good to hear people complimenting the accent it doesnt happen to much lol thanks man i really been working on controlling my voice and delivery so its good to hear you like it

[Kez]

I loved it, the hook translated exactly as i intended it

The beat is amazing, Mart is truly a God with the beats

I loved the lyrics, even though they don't have a specific focus which i think fits the idea of the song, they made me want to write some shit which for me is a good sign. Loved the sporadic kind of flow. Delivery worked well, managed to keep your accent but make it understandable. I think the bits in brackets at times that are spoken are sort of slurred but nothing that bad. Quality sounded good to me.

Just really loved everything about this track

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I loved it, the hook translated exactly as i intended it

The beat is amazing, Mart is truly a God with the beats

I loved the lyrics, even though they don't have a specific focus which i think fits the idea of the song, they made me want to write some shit which for me is a good sign. Loved the sporadic kind of flow. Delivery worked well, managed to keep your accent but make it understandable. I think the bits in brackets at times that are spoken are sort of slurred but nothing that bad. Quality sounded good to me.

Just really loved everything about this track

thanks man gladded you liked it, and good lookin on the chorus

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked it , bar,, ya beat is sick ,, iliked teh chorus and ya verses, actually i liked everything in it ,, best i hev heard from you so far,, 9/10 ,, keep posting it up

[Xray]

Dope flow man, sick and on point throughout the whole song. The beat is something different from Mart a lot more softer than his usual energetic/darker beats. Good beat, and the lyrics were dope. Flow stood out the most, and the delivery was perfect, wouldn't have it any other tone. Good shit man, track is very relaxing type of song, so its good to just chill to. Let's see if this tape tops fuck the system.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i liked it , bar,, ya beat is sick ,, iliked teh chorus and ya verses, actually i liked everything in it ,, best i hev heard from you so far,, 9/10 ,, keep posting it up

thanks man, gladded you enjoyed it

Dope flow man, sick and on point throughout the whole song. The beat is something different from Mart a lot more softer than his usual energetic/darker beats. Good beat, and the lyrics were dope. Flow stood out the most, and the delivery was perfect, wouldn't have it any other tone. Good shit man, track is very relaxing type of song, so its good to just chill to. Let's see if this tape tops fuck the system.

thanks man, and yeh this tape shall top is easy