New Verse (Listen motherfuckers)

[Xray]

I've been out of it lately, going forth and back making tracks but nothing I'm really satisfied with. This verse however I hope it's better than my previous drops. Let me know what you think.

Hurt to settle in, my soul mean definite
words like cinnamon, the cake never win a friend
you can depend on them, I'm lone wolfin on again
broke as shit, so I got nothing to lose within
but to gain it all, for riches fault, I'm bout to grim
for reign and all, my saw sickest to slaughter them
rhymes like magnitude, switching up another rank
you couldn't pass a few, my switch blade could slice a tank
maneuvers couldn't resist, your rhymes caught stitches
frankenstein's lyrics, you know what this is?
the sabotaging image, of another fuckin image
who's on my hitlist? you wouldn't wanna know bitch
When I'm in the zone, I could strip silver from chrome
attitude of a stone, rock, solid, hearted and further on
I'm screamin come on, against a pack of lions
its a jungle and I am, ain't sick of diein, so bring it on

http://limelinx.com/files/b28fbfef8e415 ... 01ce5cdbf8

Don't worry I'll be feeding everyones new shit so enjoy.

[Arabian Shady]

DAYMMMMM SON!
you're voice became deeper man, flow is sick-no doubt about that!
Lyrics were tight as well, that line about the switch blade has me goin "daym! thats hot"
sick verse, and DOPE BEAT!!

[Almostlity]

^My reaction. Nice fucking verse, loved your voice.. sounds hella good! Keep that. Beat was really good tbh I have nothing bad to say 'bout this son!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

fucking sick beat man raw as fuck.


our voice became alot ore distinct, sounds great really strong.

lyric are dope, your biggest improvment ive seen from you from way back in the day, you really hit it lyrical now man.

flow as always dope as fuck.


good verse man.

dude keep your verse on that and send my ass the beat with a open verse, i wanne spit on it

[Tash8]

sajjad good job man.. you had some dope lines in there.. that is exactly what i meant, well not exactly but it's close.. ur getting there man u are... keep it up

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

breathing were really strong man...at least u got your old voice/attitude back...
u slurred on some words....so yeah...
delivery was aite but try to me more calme pronouncation wise
flow was overall nice..couldnt find a flaw

[Vettori]

alot of that was actually great...Without the lyric it's hard to make out everything.. but enjoyed it.. u actaully flowed like a mutherfuck on this haha, liked it man keep at it...Maybe next time a full song huh ?

[Steve Spag]

As always, another very dope drop! Beat is fire and your flow on it is dominant to say the least. Lyrics were up to your standard, very nice as usual. It's a shame that it's such a short track, I would love to hear this continued into something else...

Keep it up dude!


P.S. Check out my track and let me know what you think too.
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=73115

[BILI]

Nice song man,liked your voice a lot,it sounded raw,beat was nice 2,and flow was awesome man,nice job

[Le Tunisien]

the flow is...wow i cant even find the words to describe how dope it is!!!!!!!!!!!
lyrics are pretty good too!
i really enjoyed it,really !! FUCKING GREAT VERSE,period.

feed my new shit too

[_Ironic_]

beat in- i fucks with it..sounds like that old school boom boom bap shit

yo this is solid, im feelin..I wasn't feelin how you delivered it at first..but it grew on me..at parts it sounded too angry, and then other times it sounded smooth as butter

your flow on this sick, im feelin it for sure..definitely the best thing about this track.

this was a pretty short track so i can't really give it a full feedback but I was feelin it for the most part..keep droppin, i'll be watchin.

[Slim Zaddy]

I've been out of it lately, going forth and back making tracks but nothing I'm really satisfied with. This verse however I hope it's better than my previous drops. Let me know what you think.

Hurt to settle in, my soul mean definite
words like cinnamon, the cake never win a friend
you can depend on them, I'm lone wolfin on again
broke as shit, so I got nothing to lose within
but to gain it all, for riches fault, I'm bout to grim
for reign and all, my saw sickest to slaughter them
rhymes like magnitude, switching up another rank
you couldn't pass a few, my switch blade could slice a tank
maneuvers couldn't resist, your rhymes caught stitches
frankenstein's lyrics, you know what this is?
the sabotaging image, of another fuckin image
who's on my hitlist? you wouldn't wanna know bitch
When I'm in the zone, I could strip silver from chrome
attitude of a stone, rock, solid, hearted and further on
I'm screamin come on, against a pack of lions
its a jungle and I am, ain't sick of diein, so bring it on

http://limelinx.com/files/b28fbfef8e415 ... 01ce5cdbf8

Don't worry I'll be feeding everyones new shit so enjoy.

man this site don't work for me , can u upload it somewhere else,, or just send it through msn ,,