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Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 13th, '09, 06:17

third verse is best, first verse was good but hard to keep up with the flow and rhyme scheme, 2nd verse was better, it picked up as the song went on imo, the hook was good besides those nasty ass echos you added, they are way too loud... besides that good song, one of my recent favs from you

and lol at you getting much quieter on this part:
People keep stealin from me, who the hell can i trust
Those who claim they love me, only dwell in my luck


trying to stay silent ;)
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 13th, '09, 13:33

i liked it ,, ya 3 verse is so sickk,, i liked it ,, keep it up ,,
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 13th, '09, 16:47

i've allways liked your stuff man, i rarely come in here so i hardly post but yea i think you give the word fresh a new meaning :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 16:49

Lol yea tash went quiet for like 4 seconds haha...it's annoying recording songs, in front of the person im talkin about..especially when it determines if i get to live here still afterwords. really gotta try bite my tongue.. but it wont stop it from gettin done... This Is roughly mixed.. gonna study it, then re-record :D thnx guys for feedback

Thx slim & arabian :D appreciate it
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 13th, '09, 17:48

flows sick man, bouncy but strong love it.

lyrics are amazing man. chorus is good, mixing just makes your voice sound not as strong little more open.


but great track man :y:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Tomega » Dec 13th, '09, 19:33

Damn
The song is hot!
The beat is very dope and your flow is good.
Love the lyrics.
Maybe you can use some more variation of intonation, because in some parts you flow really on and on and thats good, but some more changes of the voice in it would make it even more exciting to listen to.

Keep this shit up man, its hot
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 19:40

Good ear man, and very good idea.. i just try not to overdo it:D thx for feedin man
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 13th, '09, 22:00

As I told you on MSN this is a very nice track!
Love the new shit you're on latetly, can't wait to hear some more.
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 14th, '09, 19:57

really good choice of beat...erm you should have done a better Intro rofl :p i thought the flow was cool,i really liked the content cuz it had a meaning,as for the delivery it was cool :y: im not a big fan of the chorus maybe cuz i usually like the chorus to be a singing part :unsure: and the 3rd verse was the best!

good track overall 8/10
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 14th, '09, 20:35

thx man, yea into, wasnt really supposed to be like Amazing lol.. wasnt what i focused on, just wanted to give props to tha producer and Drop my link , but ye again thx for the feedback, was just dealin with sum shit, and decided to write about how i felt about a few things :D
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Almostlity » Dec 14th, '09, 21:32

Wow, amazing. 10/10 :worship: :worship:


to Lifeadeath: Saatanan hyvä biitti! :worship:
Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


Kill You wrote:Almostlity GOAT poster omg
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Tomega » Dec 14th, '09, 21:58

Almostlity wrote:Wow, amazing. 10/10 :worship: :worship:


to Lifeadeath: Saatanan hyvä biitti! :worship:


Satan has BET?
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Almostlity » Dec 14th, '09, 22:21

Tomega wrote:
Almostlity wrote:Wow, amazing. 10/10 :worship: :worship:


to Lifeadeath: Saatanan hyvä biitti! :worship:


Satan has BET?


nope, ''fucking good beat'' :shifty:
Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


Kill You wrote:Almostlity GOAT poster omg
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '09, 02:29

Tomega wrote:
Almostlity wrote:Wow, amazing. 10/10 :worship: :worship:


to Lifeadeath: Saatanan hyvä biitti! :worship:


Satan has BET?

LMFAOO :worship:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby lifeadeath » Dec 15th, '09, 10:10

Almostlity wrote:
Tomega wrote:
Almostlity wrote:Wow, amazing. 10/10 :worship: :worship:


to Lifeadeath: Saatanan hyvä biitti! :worship:


Satan has BET?


nope, ''fucking good beat'' :shifty:

haha :D

to Almostlity: Kiitos jäbä! :y:
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P.S, Life and Death, are you god?
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