Delusions of Grandeur ft. M-Russ (rough draft)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/69906868c8c0b10e/

M-Russ-Chorus and 2nd and 3rd verse
Me-first verse....

i'ma prolly add a lil more @ the end.....and lil adlibbings here and there..

this is prolly the first time i really felt shit on....i felt like jay did on renegade.....but i got a huge amount of respect for dunny...he's skilled...and we prolly gonna have more shit in the future

but figured i'd drop a jewel b4 i go on a 3 week leave...i still got you BAR....just gotta record.....

[Boston]

u ripped that track. str8 up im mad lazy 2 feed now i bumped it this morning. people gota peep this shit. 0 replies? fuck that. show some respect. im bumpin this shit. about to play that shit now

[mcZu]

M-Russ' lyrics are straight up dope, though his voice sounds a lil strange, dunno, maybe it's just me. Your verse Tom, is dope, flow sounds on point, delivery as well, M-Russ' flow sounds dope aswell, however, his delivery souns a lil too shaky, if you know what I mean? And, vocals sounds a lil too loud, can hardely enjoy the beat while hearing y'all verses. Chorus is the only major thing I disslike in this song, the rest is pretyy much fire. Good job, both of you.

EDIT: I'm starting to like his voice the more I listen to the song.

[classthe_king]

Like Zu said, M-Russ's lyrics are insane. Very good. Your verse is fire to but it just seems like its the same verse as on every other song. Try to switch it up a little bit.

[Boston]

yeah ill give him that but unfortunately u gota come harder than jus lyrics!! i kno dudes who be writing str8 flames but wen they come to the mic they sound like this dude! nah but u kno wat i mean

[Mr. Chambers]

Like Zu said, M-Russ's lyrics are insane. Very good. Your verse is fire to but it just seems like its the same verse as on every other song. Try to switch it up a little bit.

i don't mean to sound...uhm...arrogent...or anything but could you please explain?...is it the delivery?...or is it the rhyme scheme?

[Nimbus_9]

downloading now....quick question...I know this seems random but is this you? lol

[Mr. Chambers]

^lulz...yes it is....so who are you on hhb?

[Nimbus_9]

^lulz...yes it is....so who are you on hhb?

no one

good song, can you link me to a mixtape from each of you guys

your flow and voice plus his lyrics are great, chorus isn't too great and both verses have their ups and downs

still liked it alot though, Masta Ace beat?

[DƎRDYPK]

your getting better & better each time I hear you Tom

"but in the end it won't change the fact of the matter.
we make mistakes can't delete the accidents after.
learn from mistakes use the passion to master.
& remain real few are factual rappers"

M-Russ has 2 nice verses but idk...
I really like that nice smooth flow you had going

[Mr. Chambers]

downloading now....quick question...I know this seems random but is this you? lol

i knew there was summin odd about you.

its been up on my myspace since july...and i don't give a fuck...i put hair extensions in my hat fucking around and there we go......if i was "ashamed" of it or "hiding" it...don't you think i would keep it off of a public site like myspace?

but yes good looks on the comments....@ nimbus...its "world famous" by MOP

[Nimbus_9]

downloading now....quick question...I know this seems random but is this you? lol

i knew there was summin odd about you.

its been up on my myspace since july...and i don't give a fuck...i put hair extensions in my hat fucking around and there we go......if i was "ashamed" of it or "hiding" it...don't you think i would keep it off of a public site like myspace?

but yes good looks on the comments....@ nimbus...its "world famous" by MOP

Hmm I know someone has rapped over it...... Ace or someone else.

[classthe_king]

Like Zu said, M-Russ's lyrics are insane. Very good. Your verse is fire to but it just seems like its the same verse as on every other song. Try to switch it up a little bit.

i don't mean to sound...uhm...arrogent...or anything but could you please explain?...is it the delivery?...or is it the rhyme scheme?

I guess the flow and delivery. But don't get me wrong, its still dope.

[Vettori]

hmm..seemed okay, qualitys not bad..so definatly could hear everything... and with that being said.. i could tell u werent really putting alot of effort in it...Kinda lazy like 50 cent would do ...Adlibs were clean over it, so good work with the quality..maybe there aa tiny bit loud.. but hardly, but ye, just had a predictable flow...Through the most of it..., try changin it up a bit...have like plenty of flows, and transitions making the song feel like it has more life...and ur energy level needs to be more.

just a few things you need to work on imo... decent song..my friend did a song on this beat haha

Cool shit man

[Xray]

Agree with pretty much everything Vet said. Good verse though, and a good beat choice. Now M-Russ needs to work on his delivery a lot, he sounds like George Bush with that delivery. Idk at the beginning of each verse I was expecting "my fellow americans" to come up, other than that his flow and lyrics are good could be improved but the delivery definitely needs stepping up to do. Cool collab.