Bar - Rhyme Book Ft. Tash (Produced By Mart85)

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Another Track, this one ft's tash on the chorus and is produced and mixed by mart85.

its called Rhyme Book, the concept will become more clear in when the album is released, there will be a fully involved skit before this, the concept is the rhyme books takes over me, the chorus is the "rhyme book" speaking lyrics "im the rhyme book, the rhyme book" ect.

the verses were all structured the same way my second verse Ready Steady go was. That means they were all random lines in my rhyme book ive put together to become verses.

would really appreciate feedback, if you think back to ready steady go, this beat is completely different, the flow is completely different, the delivery is completely different, so i hope its appreciated that i am trying to be alot more "whole" and tackle different beats and styles, something ive been working on alot lately.

Bar - Rhyme Book Ft. Tash(Produced By Mart85)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/70087356961df907/




Lyrics, if it helps.

verse 1
ive had a fucked up day found out my mum and dad are siblings
my sister my cousin and my last shit just gave me ring sting
i went into my toilet and came out a hour later
had wroten three verses upon my toilet papae, i annoy the hater
coz im a cocky young gun helocopter one nun
lick two elbows one tounge not goni do what somes done
my maths is different i times my upbringing divided by rage
plus my pen and pad equals what you read on this page
im not the nice guy of rap thats trying to make freind
im the arsehole just hear to try make meet the ends
but thats something i accept aint nothing i reject
im prepared for the negatives and shooting for positives
open up you wheely bin thats were you depoisit is
for any of your commentries im goni make it now and aint no mother fucking stopping this


verse 2
if rakims the god its only right ill be jesus
but raps a hard puzzle im tryna fine me some peices
slowly make my releases starting of as a feisces
growing in to a grown ass rapping genious
my ink sinks as the papaer soaks it up
make it maself not depending on this hopeless luck
starting off a brokeless fuck knowbody showing love
and rappers younger than me are floating above
i got the mic in my hand man im heating the steel
keeping it real while im slowly goin reaching my deal
tryna get a little focus look i know this here's a line to go so
im goni be the greatest quote just me
a contoction in my brain no oxygen im insane
but i now know whats happening when im using my spit
im the laxative my musics the shit!

Verse 3
bet yall thinking whos this guy wae the mad voice
who produces more txt than mobiles and tabloids
n if you dont like my rap oh well its hate
but im sticking to my goal like im selotape
you should support me now as i strike for the goal
or youll soon be playing in the left back role
there aint aplace youll see me not recite rhymes
a look quick find somewere to write lines
remove me from rap its a black out you lose
now proclaiming myself as the hip hop fuse
if you dont get that in the night of the shame
im the rapper thats bringing all the light to the game
come find my name its hidden in these lines and its not that far
although i did get the name before i wrote a bar
so i wanne fuck up the game im trapped in heat
soon to become one of raps elite

[BILI]

Dat was pretty dope guys I love it,

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thought delivery was a lil weak...rhymes were kool..tho the scottish accent helped a lot to make them rhyme lol... mixing was clean....the hook was well done propz to mart and tash....
beat was omfg flow slipped once..in the 3rd verse when i remember right

[Tornado]

Definitelt feeling this,more your twisted style, sounded comfy on this aswell. Only thing is the chours vocals were too low otherwise nothing faultless again...shit..9/10 again...

[Tash8]

like i said, mart murdered this beat, you got some dope verses.. i wish i could rerecord my hook at my friends, cause damn i feel it's not as good as it could be.. but anwyays good job man, i'm feelin this track.

[Vettori]

WOw, I enjoyed this haha...Mart fuck you man..ur beats are gettin doper... love the eerie sounds over the hook, and tash wow killed the hook..haha Nice work man..WOW Goin nowhere but Up from here man...

and bar buddy wow...haha really nice... ur pronunciation is much clearer,,Loved the lyrics too, but i came to a sudden stop when i read this

"slowly make my releases starting of as a feisces"

Feisces where i'm from means shit...(poop) LOL

Fetus is what a baby before being born is called.

Dunno if you meant to say it, but that was the only odd thing i caught LOL

Awsome work tho...im not expecting songs like this, and yet i hear them. Uv'e progressed a bunch

Great song

[Xray]

I thought this song was really good but the mixing was bad no offense to Mart but the way he mixed it, your vocals sounded so empty it made it sound like you had no emotion at all made it hard for me to feel the track. For a beat like this you need a lot of compressing, reverb, EQ and etc. if I had the chance to mix this, I think my style of mixing would suit this beat much more, not trying to pose or anything just saying I could make this track sound better. That's the only problem with this track, other than that it was dope. The hook was dope Tash. Amazing beat, west coast shit, could see Game on this.

So if you let me have a go at this track, I'm down for it. If not, ok your choice.

[enjinn]

check your pm's!

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thanks to all the comments

WOw, I enjoyed this haha...Mart fuck you man..ur beats are gettin doper... love the eerie sounds over the hook, and tash wow killed the hook..haha Nice work man..WOW Goin nowhere but Up from here man...

and bar buddy wow...haha really nice... ur pronunciation is much clearer,,Loved the lyrics too, but i came to a sudden stop when i read this

"slowly make my releases starting of as a feisces"

Feisces where i'm from means shit...(poop) LOL

Fetus is what a baby before being born is called.

Dunno if you meant to say it, but that was the only odd thing i caught LOL

Awsome work tho...im not expecting songs like this, and yet i hear them. Uv'e progressed a bunch

Great song

thanks man, and yeh i was waiting for someone to pick up on that, the line was going to be Fetus, but its so cliche..i was like naw everyone will expect it to the the "fetus" line so i thought to myself how did i actually start out in rap ? and only one way to describe how i was at the start and thats shit... so id decided to do it different and say starting out a feices, coz i did start out shit then grew into something half decent.

I thought this song was really good but the mixing was bad no offense to Mart but the way he mixed it, your vocals sounded so empty it made it sound like you had no emotion at all made it hard for me to feel the track. For a beat like this you need a lot of compressing, reverb, EQ and etc. if I had the chance to mix this, I think my style of mixing would suit this beat much more, not trying to pose or anything just saying I could make this track sound better. That's the only problem with this track, other than that it was dope. The hook was dope Tash. Amazing beat, west coast shit, could see Game on this.

So if you let me have a go at this track, I'm down for it. If not, ok your choice.

i think any emotion that aint there is probly my fault, im pretty kool with the mixing on this i like it. but if you wish to try it i got everything in a rar so i can get it to you raw if you wanne play around with it.

[mart85]

I thought this song was really good but the mixing was bad no offense to Mart but the way he mixed it, your vocals sounded so empty it made it sound like you had no emotion at all made it hard for me to feel the track. For a beat like this you need a lot of compressing, reverb, EQ and etc. if I had the chance to mix this, I think my style of mixing would suit this beat much more, not trying to pose or anything just saying I could make this track sound better. That's the only problem with this track, other than that it was dope. The hook was dope Tash. Amazing beat, west coast shit, could see Game on this.

So if you let me have a go at this track, I'm down for it. If not, ok your choice.

Yeah I see what you're saying, but I'm just not a fan of that type of mixing, I prefer clean/natural sound. I don't really like the effect of too much compression, unless it's just for a small part in a track, but not for a whole track. And I still compressed/EQ'd the acapellas a lot so it's not like I didn't do anything to the pellas. But yeah, I'm sure you could do something interesting with the pellas, I just prefer to keep things simple and clear.

oh and thanks everybody for the comments

[randomghost]

damn mart85 ur alive where da fuck ya been?! ....track is super....beat is hot like mariahs butt haha...i love it.....bar good 2 see ya back....u flowed well...voice masterd great..delviery is not bad...hook is nice..good job tash..voice gettin much better...ya sound like cybers hill on da hook ...ma fav. verse is 3...good job peeps..keep it up..and mart props for da beat..i enjoyed listening

[GibbzyTrShady]

Im feeling this the production is top dolla!! the beat is off the hook for real
i like the flow but delivery is a lil weak rhymes are pretty sick but topic seems to drift a lil bit
kinda doesnt fit the beat but overall ide give it 8.10
Nice work man only critism is the delivery

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thanks for the feedback guys

[Xray]

I thought this song was really good but the mixing was bad no offense to Mart but the way he mixed it, your vocals sounded so empty it made it sound like you had no emotion at all made it hard for me to feel the track. For a beat like this you need a lot of compressing, reverb, EQ and etc. if I had the chance to mix this, I think my style of mixing would suit this beat much more, not trying to pose or anything just saying I could make this track sound better. That's the only problem with this track, other than that it was dope. The hook was dope Tash. Amazing beat, west coast shit, could see Game on this.

So if you let me have a go at this track, I'm down for it. If not, ok your choice.

Yeah I see what you're saying, but I'm just not a fan of that type of mixing, I prefer clean/natural sound. I don't really like the effect of too much compression, unless it's just for a small part in a track, but not for a whole track. And I still compressed/EQ'd the acapellas a lot so it's not like I didn't do anything to the pellas. But yeah, I'm sure you could do something interesting with the pellas, I just prefer to keep things simple and clear.

oh and thanks everybody for the comments

Yeah its more professional to keep acapellas natural and clear. I take back what I said though, I've been focusing on keeping my mixes as clean and natural as I can after I posted that, and before I read your post lol. So your right man, too much compression isn't good.

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keep it coming