Gibbsy- I Cant Breathe (2009) & Im'a Get There (2008)

[GibbzyTrShady]

Im' Get There

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qomFSJhcjb0
I Made this back in 2008, quality is a lil off but this was one of my first full tracks,
phil collins on the sample and its a sinima beat ,,

I Cant Breathe

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbBnxHEaWsw
I Made this early 2009 Again Quality Needs to Be Better But Just Another Mixtape Track
Sinima Beat,,unsure of the sample

My New Album is being released just after christmas
and of course kills my older less mixed tracks but either way just want a lil feed

[GibbzyTrShady]

Come On Yall Feed

i Left some feeed on others so would be apprciated

[randomghost]

damn man song is nice...flow is good..accent is ok...delivery and voice is good...nice beat....is that u on da hook?!! its sounds amazing keep it up man...lookinf forward 2 hear more also check me on http://www.youtube.com/randombigghost or http://www.myspace.com/randombigghost

cheers

[Justice]

gibbzy does it again lol dope as always man, agree with everything the dude above said basically, keep at it

[Vettori]

ur quality's whats makin it hard to understand..but like most people it's hard to get that good quality goin on, so I'll feed without that aspect...

seems like u got the basics covered, nothing really stands out..but with practice im sure youll get much better, Ur vocals are too low, so fix that up for later recordings.. i preffered the second song over the first, was just a lotta simple lines, and if they wernt simple.. It's The way ur Expressing it.. just made it sound a little boring.. tired. But yea construct ur verses..and edit like a mother fuck, get the general idea of what yu wanna rhyme about / talk about (concept) in general. and add/ take from it, so that it has it's unique sounds threwout the song..u definatly wanna avoid using the same flow throughout the song... even if it's flow changing on each individual verse, I personally like when yu can make the transitions throughout a verse.. and keep it soundin dope...But hey like i said not much i can give positive feed on, other than ur trying so keep goin.. Just work on it more...realize that the recording part of it is when it counts..so give it ur all then. and afterwords u can just listen to it over and over..perfectly how u wanted and Expected..

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im'a get there

quality makes it hard to understand eveything, not your fault man but try get betetr quality or mixing.

were are you from ? cant place the accent coz the quality.

flow is sounding great though, lyrics that i can hear sound dope, and your delivery sound on point.

hard to feed on man but you sound like you got real potential with better quality and mixing.


i cant breathe

love that sample, can hear this better man alot better, ok right flow again great man, and lyrics are great sorta deep and you got nice rhymes man really like this, delivery is strong voice and control over it is really good. dont wanne knock the quality after saying you need better mixing and this sounds beter, but invest in a better mic and stuff man it makes all the different bewtween a track someone will listen to once and one that makes there playslist. also love how the flows on these 2 songs are completely different, i love hearing artist not scared to try contrasting stuff especially new artists or un-signed artists who get trapped in 1 style they are good at.


i cant breathe was my favourite, defiantly sound like you got potnential man keep it up

[GibbzyTrShady]

Hey thanks for the responses people much apprciated

Both tracks are very start of this (imma get there was 2008) my new album is comin' soon and yes i do have a new mic
deffo sorted quality and ive switched up the flows like vetorri said so when i drop the new stuff peep then thankyou for the feed yall

[_Ironic_]

yo i listened to the tracks, you got a pretty dope flow...you got talent on ridin a beat..no doubt on that..delivery is pretty dope as well..good use of overlays..

the only real downfall is your quality bro..you should really take your stuff into a studio for a professional sound..it'll make your songs much more enjoyable to listen to..

feelin the second song better..

keep droppin and check out the "bloodline" thread if you're interested in joining in on the TR mixtape..

[GibbzyTrShady]

hey thanks man apprciate the feed and yeah ive upped the quality since these tracks to massive degree plus i came into a bit of money a couple months ago an bought a whole buncha' new recording equipment ill check out that thread to man