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Coleon vs Smithy (Cole Wins(Surprise Surprise))
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy
by Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 20:08
good verse Col, let me give you some constructive criticism
increase your vocab a bit, obv with this new system its only worth one point
and chances are against smithy it wont be need. but makes multes better and possibly rhymes as well
3 bar talks about his girl, there was some funny word play with Tiger, but talkin about sumone's girl isnt really a personal nor a good punck imo(sense we dont know his girl)
good verse, just tryin to make you better
increase your vocab a bit, obv with this new system its only worth one point
and chances are against smithy it wont be need. but makes multes better and possibly rhymes as well
3 bar talks about his girl, there was some funny word play with Tiger, but talkin about sumone's girl isnt really a personal nor a good punck imo(sense we dont know his girl)
good verse, just tryin to make you better
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy
by mcZu » Jan 5th, '10, 20:10
Lmfao, that's some real dirt you got there. Ghost writing. 
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy
by Relapse.LP » Jan 6th, '10, 00:39
The 2 Complex line was dope. 
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
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Live free. Die hard.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:09
you called me out to battle, thinking i won't defeat you
my lyrical jaws are open and my rhyme's going to eat you
wordplay get's you nowhere when no one understands it
you're a pussy, scared of Scott M, only came back when they banned him
bowl haircut, start running, your fat will burn like coal/cole
look after yourself, then maybe your ex girl might call
3rd line - he made a thread about punchlines/wordplay that you couldn't get to work
4th line - self explanatory
6th line - little birdie told me he has girl problems, lmao.
my lyrical jaws are open and my rhyme's going to eat you
wordplay get's you nowhere when no one understands it
you're a pussy, scared of Scott M, only came back when they banned him
bowl haircut, start running, your fat will burn like coal/cole
look after yourself, then maybe your ex girl might call
3rd line - he made a thread about punchlines/wordplay that you couldn't get to work
4th line - self explanatory
6th line - little birdie told me he has girl problems, lmao.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:12
Coleon wrote:3 days = 3 bars
everyone votteeee
yh man i didnt even see this up, even when i told you i was not going to battle.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Relapse.LP » Jan 8th, '10, 03:18
Must I say more? 
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:19
Relapse.LP wrote:Must I say more?
Vote?
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 03:22
Coleon gets my vote easy
but smithy discovered a multi
just make things rhyme more directly
and the punches and dope wordplay will come
but smithy discovered a multi
just make things rhyme more directly
and the punches and dope wordplay will come
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:23
Spyder wrote:Coleon gets my vote easy
but smithy discovered a multi
just make things rhyme more directly
and the punches and dope wordplay will come
Brake the vote down.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 03:25
(3)Punches - Cole
(3)Personals - Cole
(2)Multies - Cole
(1)Flow - Cole
(1)Vocab/Complex - Cole
(1)Other - Cole
did u need to see it...
i think thats the new thing
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:27
Spyder wrote::shakehead:
(3)Punches - Cole
(3)Personals - Cole
(2)Multies - Cole
(1)Flow - Cole
(1)Vocab/Complex - Cole
(1)Other - Cole
did u need to see it...
i think thats the new thing
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 03:45
imma have to go with coleon too
but smithy did a nice job defienntly gettin nicer man
but smithy did a nice job
defienntly gettin nicer manbe the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)
by Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:46
Edge wrote:imma have to go with coleon too
but smithy did a nice job
Thanks
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