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[New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 5th, '10, 13:34

new track called Posted Dated 23rd of the 12th 2020 (of post dated for short), for everyone out there, thats the date i turn 30.

the concept is one day i thought what would i ask my 30 year old self..so here it is.

due to personel reason and lyrics in the song it will not feature on any mixtape or be posted on my music pages such as youtube. so its a tr only release. id appreciate if yall kept it that way and not try to be funny, coz i dont want it on anything else but the forum. some of yall will know why if ive spoke to you on msn if i havent dont ask unless you think id tell you.

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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 5th, '10, 13:47

beat is deep so are the lyrics....
i dont think u vibe with the beat..mixing is tight again...guess mart mixed it :)
hook is also really calme and fits the track...and is on beat..
just your verse were a lil off to me.. :sweating:
but good concept here :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '10, 17:37

your beat is amazing man ,, i liked it ,,, :) ,, da way you start rapping is cool , you're flow is cool and catchy ,, i didn't like da hook , it can be done better,, and ya your second verse is better ,, to me ,, i feel like you were more on control , i liked da concept of the song,, and ya mixing is perfect ,, overall it's a great song,, i liked it ,, but if it has anther hook it will be dope :),,, :y: ,, keep it up Bar :worship:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby neversnooze » Jan 6th, '10, 01:05

if you dont mind bar, i downloaded this track to my music folder. dont worry though, i will not distribute it in any way. just personal use.

well i listened to the track and your pronounciations are sounding more clear. your flow was good and so was the multies. the beat and the tone of your voice was almost perfect also i enjoyed your hook.

9/10 :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 6th, '10, 01:09

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:beat is deep so are the lyrics....
i dont think u vibe with the beat..mixing is tight again...guess mart mixed it :)
hook is also really calme and fits the track...and is on beat..
just your verse were a lil off to me.. :sweating:
but good concept here :y:


thanks man :worship:

Slim Zaddy wrote:your beat is amazing man ,, i liked it ,,, :) ,, da way you start rapping is cool , you're flow is cool and catchy ,, i didn't like da hook , it can be done better,, and ya your second verse is better ,, to me ,, i feel like you were more on control , i liked da concept of the song,, and ya mixing is perfect ,, overall it's a great song,, i liked it ,, but if it has anther hook it will be dope :),,, :y: ,, keep it up Bar :worship:


thanks man appreciate it :worship:

neversnooze wrote:if you dont mind bar, i downloaded this track to my music folder. dont worry though, i will not distribute it in any way. just personal use.

well i listened to the track and your pronounciations are sounding more clear. your flow was good and so was the multies. the beat and the tone of your voice was almost perfect also i enjoyed your hook.

9/10 :y:


thanks man, and yeh thats no problem, i just know there is trshady soundclicks and youtube pages, and some of my material is up there without me even knowing, witch im 100% fine with, just not this track coz the lyrics are irrelevent and could would hurt someone i wouldnt want to, so i just wanne make sure it stays out my local listners eyeline lol
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Tash8 » Jan 6th, '10, 01:54

mart this beat is soo mad amazing. i'm so jealous of your skills

bar, the flow is dope as fuck...hook is calm like c-riz said, good job man, I think this is ur best hook yet....second verse just starts out amazing..all your missing is good quality man.. that's it.. great track i wish this was on ur demo tape it's dope as fuck, great vibe to it.

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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Slice » Jan 6th, '10, 02:45

beat is dope, flow is dope..
damn i liked everything in this song

great track :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 6th, '10, 04:33

I am getting to believe that mart is the only person that actually knows how to exactly mix your vocals, the quality is excelent man, i love it
plus you flow really good with the beat, nothing but greatness.
You accent sound really understandable in this particular track, but still it is a bit hard to catch all the words. but Im proud of ya man, this is a big evolution to you, yesterday I was listenin to some tracks from "fuck the system", and Im glad to see you are keepin your own style.
umm, on question I have is, How the fuck do you get all this Mart beats??? hahaha, plus If you are working on an album or mixtape, Id like to try to produce a track for ya if ya let me

so holla on msn

great song

good luck :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 6th, '10, 04:36

Beat is perfect. The quality is good. Awesome, Bar. :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Jan 6th, '10, 04:49

Well for one Mart hands down man beats sick :worship:

This concept is dope as hell, very fuckin genius first off all. You're pronunciation is better, I remember the one track I had of yours on my itunes was dope as hell but the accent was stronger, not bad just stronger, this is much better tho. The hooks good, there was one spot that the flow got kinda messed up some but overall I thought it was pretty damn good. I downloaded this, but I'm keepin it on itunes I'm not gunna sell it :shifty:

But man great track :y:

Btw that old track I had of yours I don't anymore cause my old comp crashed, I need to get that again, I have no idea what the fuck it was called either lol
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 6th, '10, 13:45

Tash8 wrote:mart this beat is soo mad amazing. i'm so jealous of your skills

bar, the flow is dope as fuck...hook is calm like c-riz said, good job man, I think this is ur best hook yet....second verse just starts out amazing..all your missing is good quality man.. that's it.. great track i wish this was on ur demo tape it's dope as fuck, great vibe to it.

PS get on msn if u got time


thanks man, and yeh im sorta bummed it wont be on anything, shows a different side that i havent got across since i started back but ill do something else to replace this.

and ill be on msn all the time or the next 2 weeks, ill as fuck so im off work.


Slice wrote:beat is dope, flow is dope..
damn i liked everything in this song

great track :y:


thanks man, glad you liked it :worship:

Big Ax-D wrote:I am getting to believe that mart is the only person that actually knows how to exactly mix your vocals, the quality is excelent man, i love it
plus you flow really good with the beat, nothing but greatness.
You accent sound really understandable in this particular track, but still it is a bit hard to catch all the words. but Im proud of ya man, this is a big evolution to you, yesterday I was listenin to some tracks from "fuck the system", and Im glad to see you are keepin your own style.
umm, on question I have is, How the fuck do you get all this Mart beats??? hahaha, plus If you are working on an album or mixtape, Id like to try to produce a track for ya if ya let me

so holla on msn

great song

good luck :y:


lol yeh man, hes did it so much he knows my quality and how to get it clean, coz i got a good mic and i got a mixer just the com aint to strong and the mic aint a condenser so it adds some problems to getting a good mix out it, mart got it locked :smoking: and me and mart have buisness deals when it comes to the beats lol

and yeh man, id love to work with lots of other producers, only problem is the quality and mixing, i can do a tracks thats better lyrical, flow, concept and has a better beat than lets say "rhyme book" but coz my quality and the mixing it wont get the attention or sound as good as it could, thats why i stck with mart i know that my effort into the track is goin to come through and its goin to sound great, but i got no problem doin a track with ya man, if you got a beat to me id do it the same way i do with tracks with mart, i get the beat, record my stuff send back all the pellas then he mixes. thats not saying other guys on here cant work with my pellas, c-riz can clean it up good sometimes tash can do it nice and sajjad can do it nearly as good as mart, i dont think youve ever mixed a full track for me man but like i said we'll sort something out on msn. sorry about eirlier on my com crashed when you messaged me.

and thanks for the feedback man :worship:

gutawafang wrote:Beat is perfect. The quality is good. Awesome, Bar. :y:


thanks man :worship:

Emadyville wrote:Well for one Mart hands down man beats sick :worship:

This concept is dope as hell, very fuckin genius first off all. You're pronunciation is better, I remember the one track I had of yours on my itunes was dope as hell but the accent was stronger, not bad just stronger, this is much better tho. The hooks good, there was one spot that the flow got kinda messed up some but overall I thought it was pretty damn good. I downloaded this, but I'm keepin it on itunes I'm not gunna sell it :shifty:

But man great track :y:

Btw that old track I had of yours I don't anymore cause my old comp crashed, I need to get that again, I have no idea what the fuck it was called either lol


thanks man glad you liked it and yeh thats kool with itunes lol :p :worship:

also im pretty good at remember all the lyrics from my songs, so if you can remember a couple of lines from the track ill be able to tell you witch song it was :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Jan 7th, '10, 03:09

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:also im pretty good at remember all the lyrics from my songs, so if you can remember a couple of lines from the track ill be able to tell you witch song it was :y:


I believe the song was called Justice :y: if you could pm that (if I was right :unsure: ) that'd be dope sir :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 7th, '10, 03:15

cant remember me having a track called justice :sweating:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... tent=music


old songs on there though if you can find it :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 7th, '10, 18:53

dope delivery ,it reall amazing how you flowed to the beat :happy:
sounds deep, emotional ,i really liked the hook too

good song overall ,keep doin ya thang :flower:
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Re: [New] Bar - Post Dated 23/12/20 (produced by mart85)

Postby Tornado » Jan 9th, '10, 18:47

Concept is original and dope as hell, and the beat suits the style of the rap you're going for. Track is dope aswell, only thing is i fell after the chorus there should be a 8 bar fade out of just the beat but yeah shame it's not on the tape but for good reason.
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