dead prez wrote:Alright since you seem to have skipped over my post, I'll break down a segment of the third verse.
Yo, the heavy metal king hold big shit, with spare clips
(Heavy metal king is a double entendre, metal is a slang for guns, and heavy metal basiclly means a huge guns)
You seein clips when the mac spit your top got split
(seein clipse, should be see eclipse, so notice the double sound of it.)
Layin dead with open eyes close his eyelids
Turn off his lights switch to darkness, cause deep in the abyss
(Turn off his lights, metaphor for you know killing him)
Is street life, blood on my kicks, shit on my knife
Youse the wild child, kid cold turnin men into mice
(Obviously turning men into pussies)
There's other segment but I'm not breaking down the wholeverse.
Notice the constanttheme of darkness, just like the constant theme of science in your verse.
Seein clips doesn't sound like see eclipse unless you're retarded. That's not a double entendre. What the fuck is a "heavy metal king". It has to make sense both ways for that to work. You said metal=gun and heavy metal=huge gun.....that's not wordplay....it's not even clever. The eyelid light switch bar is awesome. Turnin men into mice isn't world play. It's just an idiom. Not clever.
Also Diabolic relayed a consistent theme while using line long multies, and it made sense. Not to mention the perfect structure of the rhymes. That's pretty fuckin epic. Which isn't even unusual for him to do.