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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby IcedSlim Shady » Mar 9th, '12, 20:12

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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 9th, '12, 20:14

Menzo wrote:Thank God this is Eminem's thread.
whatever menz, was just trying to help the dude
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 9th, '12, 20:49

just check infinite out

edit: at the moment I'm loving this multi line

you guys are so sensitive
Slim it's a touchy subject, try and just don't mention it
Mind with no sense in it, fried, gets so frantic
'Cause eyes get so squinted, I'm blind from smoke in 'em
With my windows tinted, with nine limos rented
Doin' lines of coke in 'em, with a bunch of guys hoppin' out
All high and dosin' it
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Trimss » Mar 9th, '12, 23:09

Elision wrote:this is what you're looking for

http://youtu.be/2clsl88WoBU?t=1m19s


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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby CrashBand » Mar 9th, '12, 23:56

Pretty much his whole first verse on renegade is a great example

Cause, see, they call me a menace, and if the shoe fits I'll wear it
But if it don't, then y'all'll swallow the truth, grin and bear it
Now who's the king of these rude, ludicrous, lucrative lyrics?
Who could inherit the title, put the youth in hysterics?
Using his music to steer it, sharing his views and his merits
But there's a huge interference: they're saying you shouldn't hear it
Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
But I'm debated, disputed, hated and viewed in America
As a motherfuckin' drug addict - like you didn't experiment?
Now now, that's when you start to stare at who's in the mirror
And see yourself as a kid again, and you get embarrassed
And I got nothing to do but make you look stupid as parents
You fuckin' do-gooders, too bad you couldn't do good at marriage


TheGentlePlayer wrote:What is syllable ryming? Sorry, im new to this

and its kind of a misleading title as I made the same mistake Ellison did. Where I thought he meant try and rhyme one syllable as many times. eg. Help me remain sane no dame games came from bane To a changed man No cane thang Refrain from gang bang"

But what he was referring to is keeping the same rhyme scheme throughout an entire verse or for as long as possible. Renegade, Keepin it Raw, Stay Wide Awake (second verse) and Hello (first half of first verse) are all great examples
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby SliK » Mar 10th, '12, 00:36

It should read 'single multi' rather than 'single syllable'.
The last verse of Lose Yoursel uses the 'Salem's Lot' rhyme a lot right up to the end.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby LEminemOP » Mar 10th, '12, 03:32

Him trying to use "living room" in his rhyme on Hello was a bit of a stretch. He kinda made it work, but it didn't really fit. He forced it to fit, but still...
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby 2PointOBoy » Mar 10th, '12, 03:38

Menzo wrote:He keeps the same rhyme throughout his entire verse on the D12 song "Fame". The same "what's new" scheme is evident through the whole thing.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby KingDavid » Mar 10th, '12, 04:54

Yeah same sylable multi same thing. Great examples guys! and yeah, tech n9ne is ill man but this is TRshady haha.

renegade and loose yourself are excellent examples!
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Coulter » Mar 10th, '12, 07:31

Chemical Warfare? Is this the kind of stuff that you're asking for?

Got an axe in the duffel bag,
Couple of fags -- stuffed in the backseat muzzled and gagged,
Wrapped in bubble wrap, two lesbians, a couple Hustler mags,
Now grab the Pez dispenser, fill it up to the max with muscle relaxers,
The Governor of Alaska,
She lust when I ask her to shove my Pulaski sausage up in her ass, huh
While we hover over Nebraska, shooting at the fucking buffalo pasture,
In the helicopter man, I can't fuck her no faster,
She screaming grab my titties, Shady suck on those bastards,
But I ain't no sucka, I won't snuggle up with her after,
I'm a gigolo, but y'all look like the Juggalo rapper,

Everyday man, I just seem to get a little bit doper,
Shit, back down? Man, I'd rather lick on a scrotum,
And eat the fucking Octo-mom's pussy lips with some oprah,
While I watch Whoopi Goldberg scissor with Oprah,
While Rosie pussy farts and takes a piss on the sofa,
Get a boner and play dick swords with the Jonas,
Brothers, your mother fucking mothers aromas,
Like no other, I keep thinking of her smothered in somas.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 10th, '12, 09:25

KingDavid wrote:Yeah same sylable multi same thing
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Same-syllable-multi is redundant. Just say multi. That's what rhyming is.
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby CrashBand » Mar 10th, '12, 11:18

Elision wrote:
KingDavid wrote:Yeah same sylable multi same thing
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Same-syllable-multi is redundant. Just say multi. That's what rhyming is.


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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 13th, '12, 00:14

Amadeo wrote:
Elision wrote:I'm sorry, I misunderstood. I thought he wanted single-syllable rhyming. You're just looking for a long ass chained multi man.

Fortunately, I'm super obsessed with these. Which means I've collected hundreds of these verses over the years. Check this out, this is the longest multi that exists as far as I know


You remember that post I made where I destroyed your idol Tech N9ne for writing gibberish filler multis?

The exact same criticism applies here.
My family has a background of people who have a way with words, and I remember way back in like 97/98, my father would show me ways that different things can rhyme, and it was basically my favorite pastime. It was corny and silly, but I like to believe that it's just genetically built into me.
In 1999 I found that there was an entire genre that was built around rhyming-
That's what attracts me to hiphop so much, it's rhyming with rhythm. If it wasn't hiphop it'd be anything else that intently focuses on rhyme structure.

The reason I explain this is because I don't understand how you can tell me I'm wrong for what it is that pulls me towards this genre. It's like racism in the sense that I don't have any control over it. I'm not blind, I can tell if it's just gibberish. But most of the time it isn't. And even if it was, it would still naturally be more appealing to me at a primal level. So I mean, you can sit here and shit on me all day for subconsciously prioritizing rhyme over everything else, but it's only going to do just that -- shit on me.

And for the record, he talks about what you're accusing him of here:
http://youtu.be/gqsSFTn3Clw?t=21m41s

edit: and why do you gotta be like that? i like you :'( and louis ck is in my opinion the greatest living comedian. speaking of which, have you seen the new special?
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with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
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