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I'm Spyder Man

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Re: I'm Spyder Man

Postby Spyder » Jul 2nd, '13, 05:53

I like the 'text a neck specialist' triple breakdown.
And the Dracula line

Interested on where u at on your punch game brah
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Re: I'm Spyder Man

Postby Eedee » Jul 3rd, '13, 05:37

Lol this was pretty good, Spyder. You had some nice ass punches in there. Although at points, it just feels like you're trying too hard to make punches out of things. But when you execute them, you fucking murder it haha

So you and DGAF are doing the card?
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Re: I'm Spyder Man

Postby Spyder » Jul 3rd, '13, 05:44

Yes sir

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Re: I'm Spyder Man

Postby Eedee » Jul 3rd, '13, 05:58

Damn. That's gonna be fun to listen to.
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