I Got Over You

[Sophie]

i was 2 scared 2 post this..but then i thought i would..but uhmm..cos its like completely different 2 what all of u guys write about...its all depressing..cos that seems the easiest thing 2 write about lol [this is a poem not a song] lol..but uhmm..yeah..it's my first ever proper poem..so i kno its kinda shit...idk if i repeat myself or not..idk if it makes sense...but yeah...give "constructive criticism" lol..but like i said..its my first ever poem like..ever..proper one lol..so dont be 2 harsh lol..but uhmm..im still 2 scared 2 post this lmaoo..but yeah..here..anyways..uhmm..ok fuck it i might as well..


It was like a stab in my heart//
The way you tore me apart//
How could you do this too me//
Why could you just not leave me be.

The way you made me feel//
It was like my heart would never heal//
You cut it deep inside//
All I did was sit and cry.

But I got over you//
And you never thought that could be true//
But I proved you wrong//
All you did just made me strong.


there ya go..it seems depressing lol..but uhmm yeah..feedback?? pwease?

[Rae]

i like it.
its simple but deep in a way.
i like it hunn.

u should never be scared to post here lol.


keep it up

[Sophie]

thanks

[Flamez]

simple but deep i like it

and don't be afraid to post anything hunn..

[sinemm]

aw no its not shit..thats nice deep n meaningful like it
keep up

[spitz]

its good, i like it. its simple, but it works for what ur tryna say.

dont be afraid to post shit, u never no, u might have the new sound.

[Sophie]

thanks everyone

only thing is..i didnt kno what to call it..does any1 know what i could call it?


oh & ok i wont be afraid to post shit in future lol..thnx

[4D]

Call it "I Got Over You".

Very nice poem, I liked it a lot!!

[Sophie]

Call it "I Got Over You".

Very nice poem, I liked it a lot!!

ooh i like that name thanks

[4D]

Cool, glad ya like it, you wrote it!


That's what i always do, write the rhyme first, then when it's finished look through it for a line or phrase that sums it up!

[Sophie]

yeah thats what I was gonna do [write the rhyme first then think of a name] but I guess I couldn't think of one...if i write anymore & cant think of a name i'll come 2 u for help haha lol