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Postby Ivy » Feb 8th, '07, 02:31

I've really been in the writing mood, so I finally sat down and wrote this, the 1st two lines are from a famous quote, but I'm not sure by who. Otherwise, the rest is all of my mind :flower: Feedback is welcome.
Taylor

I've heard the greatest things in life are unseen
That's why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream
But sometimes we strive to see just a peak at what the future might hold
I've come to realize, however, that that's not life's true gold
Patience is a virtue the unseen will eventually unfold
When and where it strikes is a mystery of old
I'm frightened of what I've found, for they say we fear what we can't control
It's a miracle of evolution, something that strikes the soul
Something that binds, becomes unbreakable, and whole
How long it takes to reveal it's true identity is unknown
The force of the impact it has however, is known
This is the true meaning of life when it is uncovered
But it may take years for it to become discovered
Once it's revealed, you'll never recover
You'll never be the same once it penetrates your heart
Something that exists, even when you're apart
It comes without warning, indescribable at that
Creeps up on you like that of a cat
It's one of life's true wonders, a mystery from above
It's a little something we all call love
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby sinemm » Feb 8th, '07, 11:00

well its nice..feels it.. :) liked it.. ;)
LIFE WOULD BE A MISTAKE WITHOUT MUSIC!!
Friedrich Nietzsche
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Postby Ivy » Feb 8th, '07, 12:01

Thanks for reading :flower:
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