To A Sorry Father

[Rae]

I just started talking to Paige,
And how we feel about you is something you cant change,
I

[Tash8]

wow already you and your sis are writing together.. that's amazing


anyways, it's good but I don't know try using multis.

[Rae]

wow already you and your sis are writing together.. that's amazing


anyways, it's good but I don't know try using multis.

lol nahh she writes poems ... i wrote this by myself.
i tried to make it be from both of our point of views. but sometimes i just talked about how i felt. lol

and i cant use multies for shit. i just dunno how. i cant think of any. haha

thanks for tha feedback btw.

[Big-T]

i read it its really powerful n quite sad but written well keep it up

[Tash8]

Original:

You

[Rae]

^^ hey thanks

i apperciate it alot!
ima work on them ...

and yeah i cant spell for shit it is suppose to be through

[Tash8]

yup no problem.

[vermin]

damn it sounds like you would write that about my Dad

it just shows me more that no matter where you live, you have the same problems all over the world

incredible work, congratulations, keep doin it!

[Tash8]

damn it sounds like you would write that about my Dad

it just shows me more that no matter where you live, you have the same problems all over the world

incredible work, congratulations, keep doin it!

yea man, i wrote something like this a while ago too, everyone feels similar at some point

[Rae]

thanks vermin.

yeah it sucks that some fathers cant step up ... smh.

but writing helps to write and let it out.

[C-Game]

i talked to u on MSN .. and i know wat u mean...

good work hon...

and too bad its true..

[Rae]

i talked to u on MSN .. and i know wat u mean...

good work hon...

and too bad its true..

yeah but then again i can look at it in a good way.
i am a very strong indepent girl.
and i know that i am never gonna let a man treat me the way he treated my mom and Paige's mom.
and this is just one more thing i have in my life.
one more thing that will make me a stronger person down the road.

thats how i like to look at it.

thanks for tha feed hunn!

[JMG]

good job

[Enimee]

Rae ur shit iz so much better then what other people put out cuz u take real life issues and make material and u do it good im like so happy to see someone with your talent putting it to use like this im serious this is great keep it up babez

[Rae]

thanks ...

ehh i try. i like this one personally.
but i've tried to write about stuff that i cant really relate to.
(like most artists do) and i cant. haha

but yeah thanks for the feed!