Drifting away

by **shady_soul** » May 4th, '07, 06:40

this is something i wrote a while ago....

Im so sick and tired of all these bullshits,
I jus don

by **James R.** » May 4th, '07, 14:00

Just off top to mention the various / irked the fuck outta me lol

Anyways I can tell this was a while ago cuz the rhyming was all over the place. You'd have 3 lines rhymes then like 2 or 3 that didnt rhyme with anything then like 5 that rhymed then the flow would switch. It seems rushed, like a very early piece you did. What you were saying wasn't bad, not too deep, not too shallow, but the seizure-like rhyme scheme you had made it tough to follow

by **shady_soul** » May 5th, '07, 08:36

yeah i wrote this when i first started writing/ thanks for the feedback bru'...yeah imma' work on ma shits. your feedz really help/ thanks again/
much respect
peace

by **Global** » May 5th, '07, 09:49

isn't the song suppose too be like this "I'm drifting away with the trouble in my life im drifting away"

by **shady_soul** » May 5th, '07, 15:34

sarcasm??? yeah take it how u wan' it bru/ neway thanx fo'da response...greatly appreciated/
peace

Drifting away

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