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Postby Kojack » Aug 12th, '07, 20:40

Someone is gonna post a so called "keystyle" or some emo poem, or whatever he thinks its deep n has a meaning and then everybody getting into some i-care-bout-every-single-syllable-u-wrote impersonation and comments like "wow, very deep" and "it was good, keep it up :) " and shit like that. Dont yall get bored of having to write the same ol same ol every time someone who thinks is the next Shakespeare puts something here.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 12th, '07, 21:20

if ur talking about ur brother, then yes sir!
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 12th, '07, 22:28

Tash8 wrote:if ur talking about ur brother, then yes sir!


Im talking about everyone, Kojack included...tho yall are quick to do the opposite on Kojack.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 12th, '07, 23:02

no one's cocky here, beside kojack and enimee..

everyone's always trying to help each other improve.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 12th, '07, 23:09

Tash8 wrote:no one's cocky here, beside kojack and enimee..

everyone's always trying to help each other improve.


Thats what im talking about. "Help each other improve" yeah right, like i give a quarter'n' half fuck less if some random shady groupie or some TR forummer with the skills of steve is good or will improve or whatever, why would i? And i dont think anyone cares about people improving or not. People can hardly care less about their own skills, not to mention helping others "improve".

Still not to mention another thing: the fact that people dont put shit here becuz they wanna "improve", they post it so they gon be praised like "good one, keep it up fam". Nobody believes the old "improve my skills" bullshit, everybody wants to hear this kind of feedback: that what they wrote is the next best thing since sliced bread. They just aint admitting it.

That's how it is you know. Like...as if what Vettori just said about my freestyle is gonna make me "improve" or "be better" or "keep practicing", you shitting me?

Thats all. Feel free to hate, but thats how it is.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 12th, '07, 23:26

your somewhat right but somewhat a fag.

your saying you don't give a fuck about urself improving or someone else improving then get the fuck out of here..

but, people just going in the topic and saying good job or shit like that is stupid, or saying it's decent, that's stupid

go in there and help them on what to improve like actually criticize it.. i mean i won't do that for 4d or james r most of the time because they're way better than me and i can't help someone better than me unless i can see something is wrong.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 12th, '07, 23:41

Well...not exactly my point but we kinda have an understanding.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby James R. » Aug 13th, '07, 00:37

I agree. It amazes me that people don't get bored on here. Something can be amazing and you'll get a "Good job. :y: " or complete shit and you'll get a "needs work". It's pathetic that one of the only deep posts was completely copied from another site. And I'm not going to act like I'm completely innocent either. My feed used to be much higher quality than it is now, but why on earth would I spend 15 minutes reading, rereading, and feeding a song when the person A.) doesn't do it for others and B.) won't even return the favor. I'm not saying you should feed so other people will feed you, but if someone takes the time out to tell you how to improve the least you could do is return the favor.

there was a point when every response to anyones song that wasn't by me or 4d was no longer than 2 sentences. I severely doubt everyone is dropping perfect songs so I'm sure it's not that hard to come up with a few pointers for them
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 00:45

And i half expected to be hated on by many. Maybe i should post it on Serious Debate.

James, u expected the impossible. They-dont-care. It's what i said before. Those who post their little poem or rap rhymes or whatever, they wanna hear that they the best, they couldnt care less about "constructive criticism", whatever that is. And no matter what you gon tell em, they wont "imrove" (this here is a point...cuz by "improve" y'all mean "be just like how i want u to be cuz i say so", there is no real improvement, unless he totally useless at rhyming but thats another story) so its a no-win. People who post feedback either dont know what they talk about, or dont care bout it, or both and they juss post to keep the thread high.

Simply people, show ur true character, thats what im talking about. For people who wanna post something: DONT BOTHER, ur fame n fortune ambitions will die as u get to work as mortgage brokers for ur entire life. For people who post feedback: Pleeeease...only thing u achieve is to higher your post count.

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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 00:49

I aint even trying to be the asshole, im saying the truth. Before zshare was invented i couldnt be (as Killa says) assed to listen to anything anyone posted in the audio section. Why...why would i waste my precious bandwidth (which i need to download more beats so i can fuck em up with my wack lyrics) for anyone here. Now that zshare is here, i can click on something, listen for the first 5 seconds and then close it to go into some more important stuff.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '07, 00:51

you can't say that about everyone.. if you noticed my lyrics 2 weeks ago and now you'll notice a big change, i started using wordplay, metaphores and things i've never used before.

it's some people that don't want to improve but there's plenty others who want to

and honestly i'm lazy, if somone doesn't give me critisicm i'm not gonna go out of my way to give it to them.. just look at rap battles, i voted on 4 peoples battles and i broke down line by line and yet they dont' vote on teh battles i'm in.. i understand james r and 4d always give me breakdowns of my shit and i dont give them, it's because i can't... both of them are better than me and they usually drop things i usually can't criticize..

but then this guy named baller4life, responds like this

good job :y: , flames does the same,s o many people do the samething it's soo annoying, that's why i post my shit like a load of other places now.. and that's why i'm improving or atleast i think i am
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 00:57

Tash8 wrote:you can't say that about everyone.. if you noticed my lyrics 2 weeks ago and now you'll notice a big change, i started using wordplay, metaphores and things i've never used before.


Things that u will never have to use in rap. The ability to make listenable music (not to mention hit records) count, not wordplay n metaphors or anything else.

But on every else i cant agree more. It is how it is. Wont change tho.
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '07, 01:06

ok you might not listen to rap becuase of it's lyrics but 80% of this forum does.. what makes rappers like rakim, eminem, nas, royce is their lyrics..

wordplay, metas are part of rap.. and songs.. so whatvever
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Re: Dont yall get bored?

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 01:11

Doesnt make em successful, but thats totally different topic
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