Problem Child.

[Steve Spag]

This peice here actually doesn't really pertain to me a lot. I wrote this acapella for a friend. Her class is reading a book about some kid who was raised by drunks and he grew up with issues and stuff. She asked me if I could try and write something to the book so I tried this out:

His parents were drunks, he grew up a man//
Standing against 'em in raps, he ran//
Away from the issues, the wino's are wack//
He left with "I'll miss you" and never looked back//
The fights at his school didn't bother the kid//
The problem's within and it's topped with this sin//
No stoppin' the pen and no droppin' his thoughts//
He's talkin' to counsellers, they're poppin' his shots//
Straight into his skin, it's pericin' his arm//
This searin' alarm in his brain is a bomb//
About to go off, you doubters are soft//
You clown's are just frontin' and boy it's soo wrong//
And boy he's soo raw, he's breakin' the law//
Smokin' and drinkin' like Daddy and Mom//
He's punchin' the wall, he is never to fall//
He's a problem child, and his journey is long//

Again, it was written acapella so you might not get the right flow that I have in my mind for it, lol. But let me know what you think please

[Arabian Shady]

like u sed, i had a small problem gettin da flow, but other wise the acapella had meaning,'twas deep
nice 1 man
peace

[J Roc]

i Found a Good Flow wit it, n Besides the First 2 Lines, I liked how you told a Story wit it Man

[SajN]

Me too found a good flow with it.
It's a great story you got there
It's very deep.

[Steve Spag]

Thanks much guys, glad you liked that peice there .

[lostdaze18]

i like the story that it tells, good job

[Inzanity]

Away from the issues, the wino's are wack//
He left with "I'll miss you" and never looked back//

fucking amazing I love that line

[Steve Spag]

Haha, thanks much, glad to be getting some new faces checkin' out my work here. I'll probably be posting up another peice later on tonight. I think you'll find it pretty intresting.