Jay-19 - Why Do Some Fall (Testversion)

[Jay-19]

Okay, a friend edited the song a little, tell me if it's okay now please.

Recorded this song yesterday, and tried mixing it myself, but I'm worthless at it.
So I just wanted to know what you think, and give me some tips what I can mix better.

Jay-19 - Why Do Some Fall.mp3 - 3.69MB

[Jay-19]

Come on, 13 views and not a single advice?

[KDEWolf]

[Jay-19]

:unsure:

What?

[Big Proof 4ever]

okai

[KDEWolf]

okai

[Jay-19]

okai

Thanks, but can I do something better?

[Fa$iC]

Hi Killahgoat!


I listened now to the whole song and i really like it. It remember me a bit on "Life" Of Royce Tha 5´9´´ feat. Amerie.

Beat is nice, makes fun to listen to and the text is straight.

Maybe u should use yo voice a bit groovier, faster or summem, rhythm is good but u should work on ya flow a bit, its okay but could be much better .

For a Testversion its great


Keep it up, i am afraid for the explicit version

[Jay-19]

Hi Killahgoat!


I listened now to the whole song and i really like it. It remember me a bit on "Life" Of Royce Tha 5´9´´ feat. Amerie.

Beat is nice, makes fun to listen to and the text is straight.

Maybe u should use yo voice a bit groovier, faster or summem, rhythm is good but u should work on ya flow a bit, its okay but could be much better .

For a Testversion its great


Keep it up, i am afraid for the explicit version

Thanks man for the feed!

[Boston]

the beat is straight but lets get to it
your flow isn't that bad, but sometimes it feels like your reading and some points you should put more into your delivery. the lyrics are straight, there simple, but let me know after the 'testversion' is done and ill get more in debt. lol

[Fa$iC]

lol np bro^^

when come the finished version out?

the beat is straight but lets get to it
your flow isn't that bad, but sometimes it feels like your reading ...

when a song get record the performer got to read his rhymes he wrote down, or its a freestyle, than its different, but that´s right, it sounds to clearly that he read all that stuff^^

[Solace]

Flow is alright, no problems. Quality is meh, its not great but its not bad and theres nothing wrong with it. Mixing wasnt HORRIBLE, but i see that youve improved now that i check out those newer songs of yours. Your lyrics are good too, the delivery is good but i think it can be improved. I think delivery should be more improved on the chorus, cause i didnt mind the verses but the chorus was weak with that kind of delivery. Keep it up, i really liked the finished product of this (Try Not To Sleep).

[B.A.D.]

yo, sorry it takes me long time to feed, but I'm too fukn busy these dayz

but still, can u reupload the track, cuz zshare appears as page not found

[Boston]

when a song get record the performer got to read his rhymes he wrote down, or its a freestyle, than its different, but that´s right, it sounds to clearly that he read all that stuff^^

that doesn't mean its a freestyle, if you can have good delivery/emotion while reading then cool. but if you remember your lyrics it also helps you get more into it. but either way keep it up ha.

[Xray]

Type of shit I would listen to when I want to chill and relax you know? So I like it man, lucky its a test version though, because you need to raise your voice a lil bit more. Sounds to whisperish you know? but with raising your voice alittle would sound alot better.

Chorus was cool to, but the mixing on it sounded bit weird though. Lyrics of the song goes well with the song, so good job man I like this track but with a few more takes and practice and better mixing would make this definitely best to go best with the concept.