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In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 03:25

My new song featuring Travis K

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Lyrics:
I wake up every morning with these dreary eyes,
It’s just another day that I must bear the tide,
Listen as you all bullshit and I hear the lies,
In one ear, and out the other ear it slides,
Cause I just worry if I can clear the sky,
Will I be in the clouds, shit I ain’t scared ta die,
It’s life, not death that’s got me terrified,
So I just sit to wonder when, where and why,
I’m caught in life’s teeth all I do is bleed,
It’s not about what I want it’s about what I need,
I tried looking to the future but I can’t see,
Anything to change the pain inside of me,
There’s nowhere to run I haven’t tried to flee,
And there’s no one but myself I’ve tried to be,
So you can call me crazy and say it’s madness,
I’m just lost it’s tragic, so listen to Travis…

All the hands I’m dealt, all I do is fold them,
Why keep hands that don’t want you to hold them,
I say that but it’s hard to see my hands lift off,
I’ve broken myself down now I’m just pissed off,
This self medication is all bottled up,
I’m on the highway of life and the throttles stuck,
I’m back at first gear seeing my worst fears,
Come alive but inside I can’t persevere,
I don’t care if what I say does hurt your ears,
You don’t live life scared to just burst in tears,
And the thirst is there but I see a blocked well,
Maybe that’s why I’m hurtin and why I’m not well,
And you all know why but even I can’t tell,
Why I’m writing every night until my hands swell,
It’s hurts to see myself and who I’ve become,
So don’t forget me if love makes me succumb…
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 06:20

Soon haha just keep pming me i will i just hate zsharing shit, glad u liked the new joint
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 2nd, '09, 11:44

it' s pretty sick Emadyville , really nice songs , it's full of emotion and thoughts are well arranged , it's structured well , rhymes schemes and lyrics are great ,, your flow always sick as usual , the beat is catchy it's nice ,, and chorus is sick too , gd job here ,, keep it up homie :y: :y: :y:
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:03

Thanks for taking the time to check it out and feed, its always appreciated.
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Re: In The Sky

Postby SajN » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:19

Nice flow man :y:

Lyrics were also nice!
But at the end of the first verse it got downhills.


Lyrics on the 2nd verse were good all they way :y:


A nice track man, loved the flow :y:
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:31

Thanks for the feed and checking, glad you enjoyed it.
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Re: In The Sky

Postby SajN » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:32

You were only 1st verse right?
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:38

SajN wrote:You were only 1st verse right?


No first and second.
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Re: In The Sky

Postby SajN » Feb 2nd, '09, 16:43

You were? :o

I felt like the voice on the 2nd verse was different, but maybe something was wrong with my ears back then :sweating:
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 2nd, '09, 18:33

SajN wrote:You were? :o

I felt like the voice on the 2nd verse was different, but maybe something was wrong with my ears back then :sweating:


Yeah man idk how you fucked that one up haha
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 4th, '09, 16:41

BUMP
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Re: In The Sky

Postby enjinn » Feb 7th, '09, 04:08

damn...the flow is crazy!...you spit fast but you were very clear...thats skill...real nice...check your pm's
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 7th, '09, 04:39

enjinn wrote:damn...the flow is crazy!...you spit fast but you were very clear...thats skill...real nice...check your pm's


I did, thanks for the feed :y:
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Solace » Feb 7th, '09, 22:15

Man that flow is sick! As enjinn said, you spit fast yet clear. I enjoyed it, cept not really into the autotune. Beat was okay, i didnt really enjoy it much but we all have different preferences. Good job man, 8/10 :y:
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Re: In The Sky

Postby Emadyville » Feb 8th, '09, 00:10

Epiphany wrote:Man that flow is sick! As enjinn said, you spit fast yet clear. I enjoyed it, cept not really into the autotune. Beat was okay, i didnt really enjoy it much but we all have different preferences. Good job man, 8/10 :y:


Thanks for the feed, and I think Travis K uses it well, he uses it a lot but in the annoying way most songs use it.
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