ShAdY CaPo 08 wrote:probably the best ive ever heard from you but yea you still got shit to get down homie... take DQ's advice..

Thanks dude, im really glad people see improvement!
ThomasAguanis wrote:This beat's pretty sick. You don't sound that into the verse. Try to use some emotion of something, you didn't sound too confident. The flow was alright, some points were better than others, the last line was pretty off. Some parts were a bit hard to understand. I thought you said bananas at the beginning, but that could be the inner Vegan in me relating everything to fruits and vegetables. Also I heard "can of worms" instead of " the count of words." The quality of the audio needs to be clearer in my opinion, possibly the way you mixed it? The lyrics were pretty good, posting them made the song easier to follow. I'm sure you'll only improve in time.
Is that someone (possibly Peter Frampton) using a talkbox at the end of the beat?!?

lmfaoooo @bananas, can of worms

Thanks, and no its not the way its mixed, i dont use a mic i use a camera to record...Ill explain later if you want why i cant get a mic. Thanks for checking it. And i have no idea whos doing the talkbox, but yeah theyre saying: "Won't you believe...That everything...Is going to be alright"
Shady Babie wrote:First off beat was sick.
The verse still seemed to lack enthusiasm and the flow was choppy at parts. But better than before, your definably improving.

lyrics were great as usual.
to whom it may concern eh..? It's funny because just the other day I was thinking and decided that if I ever wanted to try and rap I'd call an album that.

Glad no know im improving. lol and sexy minds think alike, i guess thats why

Xray wrote:People saying your delivery or emotion wasn't there, I think it was, compared to your previous post it was. It's the recording equip you use that disallows us to realize the emotion or delivery. This beat is fucking amazing, damn I gotta hit KA's page soon haha. Lyrics were good, I liked them. And man the fact you didn't listen to the beat and rapped your verse and still flowed on beat is great. Big thumbs up on that. Ice Killa did a good job mixing it. This is your best track so far.
Thanks dude, and yeah i guess its cause of my erm.."equipment" lol. yeah hes got some sick beats

And yeah props to ice killa for mixing, hes always loyal to mix whenever i ask.