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Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 19:43

Well i did the mixing alone ,so yeh if i had someone pro at mixing and perfecting accapellas and stuffs would have been better...its not a finished version anyways ok ,
Any kind of Feed backs appreciated :smoking:

ok check it out, http://www.zshare.net/audio/56118972c59a7f98/
here is the lyrics:
VERSE 1 :
run to hills and shit?You can suck my dick
Fuck you and the shet u spit ill hit with my fist
every bitch that makes sick
wanna Jump and lick?!
ur song sounds like a limp bizkit diss
Go listen to more Vanilla ice discs
FKn PISS me off,fuck u !!man, its just me ohhh
Note this,Quote it,cuz le somethin,,Wrote it
Ur whole , i did Broke it,Your Hot sis i did bought it
you just ought to get insulted ,its ur fault isnt it
Coleon kid,aint got skills,he ll get killed,
pussy annon tryna diss me,Lame MC wanna list me
as an ennemie,another WAnnabe................
and if coleon is better than me
why shouldnt He,drop an Mp3
He keeps writin Text,cuz he Blows at mic
He wanna have sex, WIth Dogs That Bites
Like Epi;Hes Next be,sniped tonight
plus i might,Get in a fight ,and Rape him with no motherfkn light just cuz

CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick that made me sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring us some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!

VERSE 2:

I know thats right,In Every Sight,In every Site in Every Side
Epihpany,Coleon , Mc hilarious,Will get Anxious and Furious
YOu got no Reason to stay, Cuz ur still gay
livin to Play With my dick,Everyday ill make u sick
till u pray and i wont care,Whatever the fuk ull say
But How Dare,you just may Fuk urself but i wont pay
attention,need to save my reflection,And Hit ur affection
this is my passion,Since its the fashion..as
as im smashin dimes and clashin crimes,
im Flashing Lines and Crashing Behind ...
Fuked ur sister 2 many times
Disgustin and Odd,get instructions from god
You can suck my dick,do me a blow Job
you cant see me, but i am the right one
Who fuked ur mom,Made u bro and son
imma tell the story,he got no glory
get pipe on the side,and hide in this site
they all lie on their pride,
.......
CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick that made me fkn sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so im sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!


VERSE 3 :
im sick of talkin,With Dicks Walkin,the shit is workin
they keep jerkin,cuz my shit is Hurtin those pussies Blurbin
Die Betches and Nurses,Faggot your heard this,How fkn Neard is?!
To Make me Nervous,it is a purpose,Fuk off from the surface
it is a service,to punch this Motherfuker in the fkn Face
fkn praise, me for Killin this faggot in every Place
ill practise sex with ur mom and get respect this shit harms
ull be on street,cuz u wont sleep, affraid to dream
of things u never seen,like ur mom's.. scene
oh Dear,im who u fear,and dont wanna hear
that i still feel that ill be here
to piss u every Year,this shit is clear
u never knew but i bleed BLue,thats what i do
im so true so ill beat you and ur crew
and ur mom too ,u can Sue..me once i flew
im sick of You,and dick riders
Lame Ass G im a just a sick fighter

CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick made me fkn sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so im sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!
Last edited by Le Tunisien on Feb 24th, '09, 21:14, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby The GameKeeper » Feb 24th, '09, 19:50

Im gonna be brutally honest man... That was straight up whack. You sound bored, yout lyrics are lame and you are hard to understand. Not to mention he beat sounds like something u make on one of those Casio keyboards little kids use...
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 19:53

The GameKeeper wrote:Im gonna be brutally honest man... That was straight up whack. You sound bored, yout lyrics are lame and you are hard to understand. Not to mention he beat sounds like something u make on one of those Casio keyboards little kids use...

Ok no hate in ur opinion
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Slovinec » Feb 24th, '09, 20:42

i knew this guy was asian, this shit was whack
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Back.Again » Feb 24th, '09, 20:53

:sleeping: I slept during the song ... Your chorus woke me up, and was wondering if you wanna be banned ? It's so easy to insult the family (Mother, sister, fuck, suck, ... Can't you find somethin' else. I think I used that when I was 5 years old. Nah ?).

Wack.

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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 21:51

Coleon wrote:i thought you said you were done sucking, i mean rapping from to many haters anyway thought i'd respond

try to blow past me, well lil bitch see ya
When I see a corny rapper, homie it’s tortilla
You know me I’ll eat ya, reach through the speaker
You always been a little fag ever since I meet ya
Oops I mean met ya, still better I bet ya,
Like a dui driver bitch, homie I’ll wreck ya
Do this on the regular, fuck what god ya holla ta
But this isn’t secular, fuck Tunisia and Allyah too
Won’t come near me dude, slit up ya venereal
But diseases up there already from Libya & Algeria
And I should sponsor ya, for a nickel a month
Cause with no food out there’s gotta tickle ya gut
Give pickle to ya slut, lay her on her back man
I’d blow up first but you’re closer to Afghanistan
Soulja Boy raps, don’t tell me what’s Hannenin
Won’t blow up on the net , don’t bring DJ Cannon in

Wahahahahahaha the shet ur talkin about is so fkn Retarded, wtf u talkin about allah and afghanistan and even food shet ??! hahahah u really got no idea, And oh yeah im playin intrnet right from the jungle right now and im eating the fruits around here and there is some wild animals crossin around HAHAHAHAHHAH lol ur such a lil kid
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby mcZu » Feb 24th, '09, 21:55

Chet Starr wrote:will u 2 keep this kid shit out of the audio stage


W to the fucking ORD, this shit is fucking retarded.
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 21:59

Coleon wrote:I'm in here because he is, he said the beef was over and he didn't want to involve all of us and he posts audio dissing us all even after he said he was finished, he's a little bitch and I'll respond every time he does this shit, no hate to anyone else

this was the last Diss :tounge2: fuked u up :smoking: u wont even be drop an mp3 like i stated :whistle:
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 22:20

Coleon wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
Coleon wrote:i thought you said you were done sucking, i mean rapping from to many haters anyway thought i'd respond

try to blow past me, well lil bitch see ya
When I see a corny rapper, homie it’s tortilla
You know me I’ll eat ya, reach through the speaker
You always been a little fag ever since I meet ya
Oops I mean met ya, still better I bet ya,
Like a dui driver bitch, homie I’ll wreck ya
Do this on the regular, fuck what god ya holla ta
But this isn’t secular, fuck Tunisia and Allyah too
Won’t come near me dude, slit up ya venereal
But diseases up there already from Libya & Algeria
And I should sponsor ya, for a nickel a month
Cause with no food out there’s gotta tickle ya gut
Give pickle to ya slut, lay her on her back man
I’d blow up first but you’re closer to Afghanistan
Soulja Boy raps, don’t tell me what’s Hannenin
Won’t blow up on the net , don’t bring DJ Cannon in

Wahahahahahaha the shet ur talkin about is so fkn Retarded, wtf u talkin about allah and afghanistan and even food shet ??! hahahah u really got no idea, And oh yeah im playin intrnet right from the jungle right now and im eating the fruits around here and there is some wild animals crossin around HAHAHAHAHHAH lol ur such a lil kid



not allah, allyah, it's word play, secular has t do with religion and all yall is writ as allah, and dud I know maps, and you are closer to Afghani, it's distance, and I'm such a little kid? I'm fifteen and don't grown up and you're 19 and you argue like someone just stole your lollipop ut your baby stroller

and no shit I won't drop an mp3, i don't want to come off as a talentless fuck like you
WAHAHAHAHHA u know the map and tunisia is near to afghani ahahahah Dude go learn some geographie u suck ,u need some Culture :D :D :D hahahaahha but anyways u wont drop an mp3 so im bodyin u,
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Solace » Feb 24th, '09, 22:27

Dude, horrible song<good lyrics. You didn't body him at all. Song was whack even though I didnt hear the song. You need to make good lyrics, even if the song is crappy. If your flow is fucked, if your delivery is bad, if your beat choice was bad, if the mixing was bad, you got the lyrics to fall back on. We've won this erm..."beef" if you call it that...Take it as hate or honest feedback, I don't care, as long as you eventually improve :y:
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 22:33

Epiphany wrote:Dude, horrible song<good lyrics. You didn't body him at all. Song was whack even though I didnt hear the song. You need to make good lyrics, even if the song is crappy. If your flow is fucked, if your delivery is bad, if your beat choice was bad, if the mixing was bad, you got the lyrics to fall back on. We've won this erm..."beef" if you call it that...Take it as hate or honest feedback, I don't care, as long as you eventually improve :y:

dude how come can u tell a honest feed back if u didnt hear the song? :unsure: and how can u say u won the beef if i only got dissed one time in audio by annon and it was a short one ,uhmmm nahhhh :flower: :8)
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Solace » Feb 24th, '09, 22:35

le tunisien wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Dude, horrible song<good lyrics. You didn't body him at all. Song was whack even though I didnt hear the song. You need to make good lyrics, even if the song is crappy. If your flow is fucked, if your delivery is bad, if your beat choice was bad, if the mixing was bad, you got the lyrics to fall back on. We've won this erm..."beef" if you call it that...Take it as hate or honest feedback, I don't care, as long as you eventually improve :y:

dude how come can u tell a honest feed back if u didnt hear the song? :unsure: and how can u say u won the beef if i only got dissed one time in audio by annon and it was a short one ,uhmmm nahhhh :flower: :8)

Honest feed on the lyrics. And by reading other comments, it seems like the song was whack. And i can say we won this "beef" because everyone has given more positive feedback on our text disses which were merely for fun and MC Anonymous' track.
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 22:42

Epiphany wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Dude, horrible song<good lyrics. You didn't body him at all. Song was whack even though I didnt hear the song. You need to make good lyrics, even if the song is crappy. If your flow is fucked, if your delivery is bad, if your beat choice was bad, if the mixing was bad, you got the lyrics to fall back on. We've won this erm..."beef" if you call it that...Take it as hate or honest feedback, I don't care, as long as you eventually improve :y:

dude how come can u tell a honest feed back if u didnt hear the song? :unsure: and how can u say u won the beef if i only got dissed one time in audio by annon and it was a short one ,uhmmm nahhhh :flower: :8)

Honest feed on the lyrics. And by reading other comments, it seems like the song was whack. And i can say we won this "beef" because everyone has given more positive feedback on our text disses which were merely for fun and MC Anonymous' track.

But at least i come up with 4 minutes Diss Audio, come on come up with ANYTHING audio :whistle: wont happen i know like i said in my lines to coleon
"if coleon is better than me
then why shouldnt He,drop an Mp3
He keeps writin Text,cuz he Blows at mic

He wanna have sex, WIth Dogs That Bites"
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Solace » Feb 24th, '09, 22:46

le tunisien wrote:But at least i come up with 4 minutes Diss Audio, come on come up with ANYTHING audio :whistle: wont happen i know like i said in my lines to coleon
"if coleon is better than me
then why shouldnt He,drop an Mp3
He keeps writin Text,cuz he Blows at mic

He wanna have sex, WIth Dogs That Bites"

How do you know he has a mic? And if he blows on the mic, you shouldn't be talking will all the bad feed you got on this track. Thats 1 thing ive learned, i should shut up talking about my illness and focus on more personal/important subject, which is why after my 1st track I shut up about that shit.

Anyways, dont drop shitty disses. Listen to Sajjad's sticcy z diss or 1 Mic and then find how you need to make a diss sound like. not "oh your a bitch, your ugly like stitch", no. You need punchlines, and clever ones at that.
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Re: Redzek - Fuck The Crew

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 23:56

Coleon wrote:
le tunisien wrote:

not allah, allyah, it's word play, secular has t do with religion and all yall is writ as allah, and dud I know maps, and you are closer to Afghani, it's distance, and I'm such a little kid? I'm fifteen and don't grown up and you're 19 and you argue like someone just stole your lollipop ut your baby stroller

and no shit I won't drop an mp3, i don't want to come off as a talentless fuck like you
WAHAHAHAHHA u know the map and tunisia is near to afghani ahahahah Dude go learn some geographie u suck ,u need some Culture :D :D :D hahahaahha but anyways u wont drop an mp3 so im bodyin u,



I said Tusnia is closer to Afghanistan, remember?

and your ass everyones personal pin cushion so stu, everybody bodies you, my little sister bodies you, a guy withno body bodies you, you blow, 4 min long diss? damn dude that's talent, I could fart in a mic for 4 mins and still body your ass[/quote]
Ewww Non sense ur really talkin bullshit,uhhh like whatever?! lol wtf hahahahah ur such a ridiculous kid and btw ,no tunisia is not closer to afghanistan ahahahha lol FAIL!!!
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