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ok check it out, http://www.zshare.net/audio/56118972c59a7f98/
here is the lyrics:
VERSE 1 :
run to hills and shit?You can suck my dick
Fuck you and the shet u spit ill hit with my fist
every bitch that makes sick
wanna Jump and lick?!
ur song sounds like a limp bizkit diss
Go listen to more Vanilla ice discs
FKn PISS me off,fuck u !!man, its just me ohhh
Note this,Quote it,cuz le somethin,,Wrote it
Ur whole , i did Broke it,Your Hot sis i did bought it
you just ought to get insulted ,its ur fault isnt it
Coleon kid,aint got skills,he ll get killed,
pussy annon tryna diss me,Lame MC wanna list me
as an ennemie,another WAnnabe................
and if coleon is better than me
why shouldnt He,drop an Mp3
He keeps writin Text,cuz he Blows at mic
He wanna have sex, WIth Dogs That Bites
Like Epi;Hes Next be,sniped tonight
plus i might,Get in a fight ,and Rape him with no motherfkn light just cuz
CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick that made me sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring us some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!
VERSE 2:
I know thats right,In Every Sight,In every Site in Every Side
Epihpany,Coleon , Mc hilarious,Will get Anxious and Furious
YOu got no Reason to stay, Cuz ur still gay
livin to Play With my dick,Everyday ill make u sick
till u pray and i wont care,Whatever the fuk ull say
But How Dare,you just may Fuk urself but i wont pay
attention,need to save my reflection,And Hit ur affection
this is my passion,Since its the fashion..as
as im smashin dimes and clashin crimes,
im Flashing Lines and Crashing Behind ...
Fuked ur sister 2 many times
Disgustin and Odd,get instructions from god
You can suck my dick,do me a blow Job
you cant see me, but i am the right one
Who fuked ur mom,Made u bro and son
imma tell the story,he got no glory
get pipe on the side,and hide in this site
they all lie on their pride,
.......
CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick that made me fkn sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so im sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!
VERSE 3 :
im sick of talkin,With Dicks Walkin,the shit is workin
they keep jerkin,cuz my shit is Hurtin those pussies Blurbin
Die Betches and Nurses,Faggot your heard this,How fkn Neard is?!
To Make me Nervous,it is a purpose,Fuk off from the surface
it is a service,to punch this Motherfuker in the fkn Face
fkn praise, me for Killin this faggot in every Place
ill practise sex with ur mom and get respect this shit harms
ull be on street,cuz u wont sleep, affraid to dream
of things u never seen,like ur mom's.. scene
oh Dear,im who u fear,and dont wanna hear
that i still feel that ill be here
to piss u every Year,this shit is clear
u never knew but i bleed BLue,thats what i do
im so true so ill beat you and ur crew
and ur mom too ,u can Sue..me once i flew
im sick of You,and dick riders
Lame Ass G im a just a sick fighter
CHORUS :
Mc Annonymous:is just a motherfucker wanna suck some more
Mc Hilarious : his mother is a bitch his sister is a whore
Coleon punkass kid:A fkn lil prick made me fkn sick
Niggas they ask to,suck my dick
313shady:what is his goal? to bring some Bore??
Homie IceKilla,Hes nice so im sry that i pissed u twice
Fuk the fkn Creeeew :Niggas Suggest it to get blasted,and thats it
you will get ur ass kicked lame ass bastards!