Solace - When Will It Stop?

[enjinn]

you need to upp the volume of your verse...but this shit is solid...good shit

[Slim Zaddy]

well i agree the beat was extremely sick epiphany , i loved it .. but as said work on delivery a little bit ,, your flow was off and on , on some spots .. your lyrics was there ,, they are nice .. but i'm not feeling you into the song , feel what you spit before even saying it into the mic . that's the key i guess. to sound good .. just work on that ,, i hope i hve helped homie .. gd luck in further songs .. i'm still listening to ya .. keep it up

[Purple23Haze]

I tryed to listen to this but zshare doesn't give me an option how can I hear this?

[Solace]

you need to upp the volume of your verse...but this shit is solid...good shit

Wow really? Damn...Thanks glad you liked it!

well i agree the beat was extremely sick epiphany , i loved it .. but as said work on delivery a little bit ,, your flow was off and on , on some spots .. your lyrics was there ,, they are nice .. but i'm not feeling you into the song , feel what you spit before even saying it into the mic . that's the key i guess. to sound good .. just work on that ,, i hope i hve helped homie .. gd luck in further songs .. i'm still listening to ya .. keep it up

man I'm really glad you did detailled feedback. I'll keep trying the delivery, i know ill improve cause i been listening to my first song ever and damn i sounded like i was whispering...thanks man

I tryed to listen to this but zshare doesn't give me an option how can I hear this?

Hmm I'll put up a megaupload link...

[AspirinE]

I liked it, good lyrics, and the beat is superb... ( is it urs? can i have it? )

- needs some work on flow (just a lil) and some major update on audio quality.

[Solace]

I liked it, good lyrics, and the beat is superb... ( is it urs? can i have it? )

- needs some work on flow (just a lil) and some major update on audio quality.

lm wondering why people think its my beat considering the whole KAY AAY AY thing at the beginning (aka its mister ka's beat).

ill try working on the flow and yeah when i get a chance i neeeeeeeed a fucking mic. damn im suprised you didnt mention my bad delivery thanks dude i appreciate you feeding

PS. You guys think that when i get thru puberty my delivery will get better or what?

[E-Ternal42o]

u need to work on mastering and delivery, or a better mic and delivery, sumthins up with it

[Solace]

u need to work on mastering and delivery, or a better mic and delivery, sumthins up with it

Yeah my quality is due to that I record with a camera....lol. Thanks for checking it man appreciate it alott.

[AspirinE]

Well first off, how do i improve delivery?

- write ur lyrics to the beat not to the text...
- only use as many words as u need, line fillers and extra multis in one bar dont always do good/
- rhyme from memory instead of reading, no matter how many takes it takes you untill u get it 100% right, from my personal experience its wat does it for me. Wen you want to make a good track u cant be lazy, nobody says its easy, its the whole idea..
-use a word phrasing approach that is unique for you. Like poetry shit ... nahmsaying.


just some points, in my efforts to help.

[Solace]

Well first off, how do i improve delivery?

- write ur lyrics to the beat not to the text...
- only use as many words as u need, line fillers and extra multis in one bar dont always do good/
- rhyme from memory instead of reading, no matter how many takes it takes you untill u get it 100% right, from my personal experience its wat does it for me. Wen you want to make a good track u cant be lazy, nobody says its easy, its the whole idea..
-use a word phrasing approach that is unique for you. Like poetry shit ... nahmsaying.

dont the first couple improve flow not delivery? And yeah i was rapping off pure memory on this so...lol. But yes it does improve it. Word phrasing? What do you mean by that?

Thanks

[AspirinE]

Well first off, how do i improve delivery?

- write ur lyrics to the beat not to the text...
- only use as many words as u need, line fillers and extra multis in one bar dont always do good/
- rhyme from memory instead of reading, no matter how many takes it takes you untill u get it 100% right, from my personal experience its wat does it for me. Wen you want to make a good track u cant be lazy, nobody says its easy, its the whole idea..
-use a word phrasing approach that is unique for you. Like poetry shit ... nahmsaying.

dont the first couple improve flow not delivery? And yeah i was rapping off pure memory on this so...lol. But yes it does improve it. Word phrasing? What do you mean by that?

Thanks

There is no delivery without flow, and thus no delivery without flow. If u can flow ur words to the point that it comes like an instinct it is natural ur delivery will step up a notch, and ull start to sound more instinctive and sure on the mic, like u'll give the mic all of ur anger and shit.

Word phrasing...

ok lets take for example... You can say:

"im phrasing words, and i sound amazing in rhymes, at times"

but u can use a unique approach

"amazing in rhymes i sound, word phrasing at times"

wording is more interesting and is more compact and u can intergrate flow like that.

[Solace]

Oh i see, so I have to switch things up in a way that others may not think of? Thanks for helping. And i guess your right, there is no flow without delivery; vice versa.

[AspirinE]

Oh i see, so I have to switch things up in a way that others may not think of? Thanks for helping. And i guess your right, there is no flow without delivery; vice versa.

no biggie man, im not much of a teacher on this, i dont like the whole idea of telling people how to rhyme, but id say this is like a experience exchange... dont get ur enthusiasm down, u really do have it, i actually liked the track

As for word phrazing, and flow, try reading some of BIGGIE lyrics, the man was a flow genius, if u look carefully i think ull get wat i mean about word phrazing... sometimes rappers dont even rhyme in bars but the bar sounds on point ...

[Solace]

Oh i see, so I have to switch things up in a way that others may not think of? Thanks for helping. And i guess your right, there is no flow without delivery; vice versa.

no biggie man, im not much of a teacher on this, i dont like the whole idea of telling people how to rhyme, but id say this is like a experience exchange... dont get ur enthusiasm down, u really do have it, i actually liked the track

As for word phrazing, and flow, try reading some of BIGGIE lyrics, the man was a flow genius, if u look carefully i think ull get wat i mean about word phrazing... sometimes rappers dont even rhyme in bars but the bar sounds on point ...

Aiight man thanks. Damn im actually like, if i could say it, a fan of yours so it means a lot from you saying you liked it. This brings up a whole new world for me cause if I can get people to think my tracks are decent here then when im 15... lol thanks again dude. I'll go download a biggie album then