enjinn wrote:you need to upp the volume of your verse...but this shit is solid...good shit
z_em wrote:well i agree the beat was extremely sick epiphany , i loved it .. but as said work on delivery a little bit ,, your flow was off and on , on some spots .. your lyrics was there ,, they are nice .. but i'm not feeling you into the song , feel what you spit before even saying it into the mic . that's the key i guess. to sound good .. just work on that ,, i hope i hve helped homie .. gd luck in further songs .. i'm still listening to ya .. keep it up
Purple23Haze wrote:I tryed to listen to this but zshare doesn't give me an option how can I hear this?
AspirinE wrote:I liked it, good lyrics, and the beat is superb... ( is it urs? can i have it?)
- needs some work on flow (just a lil) and some major update on audio quality.
E-Ternal42o wrote:u need to work on mastering and delivery, or a better mic and delivery, sumthins up with it
Epiphany wrote:Well first off, how do i improve delivery?
AspirinE wrote:Epiphany wrote:Well first off, how do i improve delivery?
- write ur lyrics to the beat not to the text...
- only use as many words as u need, line fillers and extra multis in one bar dont always do good/
- rhyme from memory instead of reading, no matter how many takes it takes you untill u get it 100% right, from my personal experience its wat does it for me. Wen you want to make a good track u cant be lazy, nobody says its easy, its the whole idea..
-use a word phrasing approach that is unique for you. Like poetry shit ... nahmsaying.
Epiphany wrote:AspirinE wrote:Epiphany wrote:Well first off, how do i improve delivery?
- write ur lyrics to the beat not to the text...
- only use as many words as u need, line fillers and extra multis in one bar dont always do good/
- rhyme from memory instead of reading, no matter how many takes it takes you untill u get it 100% right, from my personal experience its wat does it for me. Wen you want to make a good track u cant be lazy, nobody says its easy, its the whole idea..
-use a word phrasing approach that is unique for you. Like poetry shit ... nahmsaying.
dont the first couple improve flow not delivery? And yeah i was rapping off pure memory on this so...lol. But yes it does improve it. Word phrasing? What do you mean by that?
Thanks
Epiphany wrote:Oh i see, so I have to switch things up in a way that others may not think of? Thanks for helping. And i guess your right, there is no flow without delivery; vice versa.
AspirinE wrote:Epiphany wrote:Oh i see, so I have to switch things up in a way that others may not think of? Thanks for helping. And i guess your right, there is no flow without delivery; vice versa.
no biggie man, im not much of a teacher on this, i dont like the whole idea of telling people how to rhyme, but id say this is like a experience exchange... dont get ur enthusiasm down, u really do have it, i actually liked the track![]()
As for word phrazing, and flow, try reading some of BIGGIE lyrics, the man was a flow genius, if u look carefully i think ull get wat i mean about word phrazing... sometimes rappers dont even rhyme in bars but the bar sounds on point ...
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